Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
It might seem logical at first, but there are many flaws in argument stated above. In order to make article seem logical, Author need to provid better reasoning for the few points else article will be fallacious.
Firstly, author states that they received complaints from viewers about station's coverage of weather and local news but he failed to give a better explantion about what exactly were of the complaints, were these complaints really about increased time to national news? Maybe be these complaints about something else, so in order to clarify this author need to provide evidence that these complaints was really about the cut of time for local and weather news.
Secondly, author states that local advertisters canceled their contracts but he failed to mention what exactly was the reason that these advertiser canceled their contrants, there can a lot different reasons, for example, advertisers were offered more lucarative deals from the revial tv stations etc. So author need to provide evidence why these advertisers canceled their contracts.
In conculsion, Author need to clarify all these fallacys about was the loss in revenues where directly related to increasing time to national news instead of local news. Only then the conculsion of the article will be logical.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advertiser' or 'these advertisers'?
Suggestion: this advertiser; these advertisers
...ention what exactly was the reason that these advertiser canceled their contrants, there can a l...
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Line 13, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culsion of the article will be logical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 2260.96107784 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30917874396 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51571642762 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 204.123752495 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545893719807 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 705.55239521 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0162744651 57.8364921388 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.375 119.503703932 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.70786347227 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20805397412 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899321957278 0.0743258471296 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110347734403 0.0701772020484 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124679152752 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110531141154 0.0628817314937 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 98.500998004 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 12.3882235529 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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