Business Manager of a television station conclude that in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, they should restore time devoted to its former level. But, his conclusion with his explanation does not seems appropriate and convincing.
Firstly, business manager has not clearly explain about the medium through which they are receiving complaints. Whether complaints are published in newspaper or on public interviews which are authentic source and it force manager to think about this issues and take actions but if this complaints are based on internet or on some web articles then they should not be sure on it and take action but he should survey on it and be sure about it.
Secondly, late-night news are usually have less viewer as compare to day shows. Manager could start new day-time news in programs which is devoted to weather and local news to attract the viewers or they can divide time equally at late-night news for weather, national news and local news. Viewers would be happier if they receive all information at single program. Do, manager should think of combining these rather than cutting off it.
Thirdly, local businesses that used to advertise during late-night news programs cancelled their advertising contracts would not be related with their time devotee to national news. It would be rather that the local businesses are in loss or they are not satisfied with the behavior of the manager or stations itself. Manager should focus on why the local business partner are cancelling their contact with them not to conclude it with the assumption he have in this mind.
Therefore, it cannot be plausible to conclude for manager explanation on this topics as he have not provided any eloquent reason with proof. I completely disagree with manager.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 302 350
No. of Characters: 1503 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.977 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.521 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.138 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.337 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...onclusion with his explanation does not seems appropriate and convincing. Firstly, b...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...onclusion with his explanation does not seems appropriate and convincing. Firstly, b...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forces'?
Suggestion: forces
...views which are authentic source and it force manager to think about this issues and ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rce and it force manager to think about this issues and take actions but if this com...
^^^^
Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...out this issues and take actions but if this complaints are based on internet or on ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... Secondly, late-night news are usually have less viewer as compare to day shows. Ma...
^^^^
Line 4, column 454, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...t to conclude it with the assumption he have in this mind. Therefore, it cannot be ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... to conclude for manager explanation on this topics as he have not provided any eloq...
^^^^
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...anager explanation on this topics as he have not provided any eloquent reason with p...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 302.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08609271523 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55622276269 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526490066225 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1987435639 57.8364921388 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250140549329 0.218282227539 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885983715139 0.0743258471296 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128484757268 0.0701772020484 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130886078803 0.128457276422 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137250610914 0.0628817314937 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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