"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
The above argument i a memorandum stated by the businees manager of a television station.According to the memorandum, time alotted to the natonal news segment was increased at the the cost of decreased local and weather news during the late-night news program. Moreover, it has been stated that complaints received were mainly pertaining to the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition it has been stated that, several local businesses that used to advertise duruing the program had canceled their contracts with the station.The memeorandum comes with a solution to restore the tme devoted to weather and local news to its former leverl in order to avoid losing further revenues in advertising and increase in viewership. Though the solution seems to solve the issue when read through once, it has many loopholes that undemine the argument. The manager have not given a careful invetigation to the issue.
First of all, it is stated that several complaints were recieved from the viewers during the time of late- night news program.It is also stated that these were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. Howver, the arguement failss to state what the complaints of the viewers were. In oder to get a clear picture, it is imperative to understand the complaints of viewers. There are chances werein, the quality of the news bradcasted is very low. While many other news centers come out with news with relevant content and those with pressing issues , the stations coverage of news may be blant and mundane.Moreover the are chances werein more advertisements are played at the time of news therby less information being communicated by the news center. Furthermore, there are chances weherein the stations employees such as the news anchor and other professionals does not stick to code of conduct required for a professional in this area of expertise. Addtionally, there could be chances that other news center take on an innovative approach to pass on information that arrests the attention of the viewers than this station.Therefore, the comppalints of the viewers have to be taken into consideration before making a suggestion to resolve the issue.
Moreover, it has been stated that the station lost several advetising contracts with local bussinesses. However, it is iilogical to suggest that it was due to increased time for national news. Advertising their firm and busiinesses on natpnal news leads them to be more popular on a national clae which could prove beneficial for them. However, the reasons for their withdrwal could be due the tensions between the mangament of the advertising comany and the station. Moreover, it could be that their adevertiments had less screen time that forced them to take an action. It is also hihly possible that they must have given advertiaments to news stations with higher viewership.
To conclude, several factors must be taken ito consideration while suggesting a solution for the above arguement. Without providing adequate arguements such as those presented above the above memorandum is severely undermined.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The above argument i a memorandum stated by the businees manager of a television station.According to the memorandum, time alotted to the natonal news segment was increased at the the cost of decreased local and weather news during the late-night news program.
Error: natonal Suggestion: national
Error: alotted Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: businees Suggestion: business
Sentence: In addition it has been stated that, several local businesses that used to advertise duruing the program had canceled their contracts with the station.The memeorandum comes with a solution to restore the tme devoted to weather and local news to its former leverl in order to avoid losing further revenues in advertising and increase in viewership.
Error: leverl Suggestion: level
Error: duruing Suggestion: during
Error: memeorandum Suggestion: memorandum
Sentence: Though the solution seems to solve the issue when read through once, it has many loopholes that undemine the argument.
Error: undemine Suggestion: undermine
Sentence: The manager have not given a careful invetigation to the issue.
Error: invetigation Suggestion: investigation
Sentence: First of all, it is stated that several complaints were recieved from the viewers during the time of late- night news
Error: recieved Suggestion: received
Sentence: Howver, the arguement failss to state what the complaints of the viewers were.
Error: failss Suggestion: fails
Error: arguement Suggestion: argument
Sentence: In oder to get a clear picture, it is imperative to understand the complaints of viewers.
Error: oder Suggestion: over
Sentence: There are chances werein, the quality of the news bradcasted is very low.
Error: bradcasted Suggestion: broadcasted
Error: werein Suggestion: were
Sentence: While many other news centers come out with news with relevant content and those with pressing issues , the stations coverage of news may be blant and mundane.Moreover the are chances werein more advertisements are played at the time of news therby less information being communicated by the news center.
Error: werein Suggestion: were
Error: blant Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: therby Suggestion: thereby
Sentence: Furthermore, there are chances weherein the stations employees such as the news anchor and other professionals does not stick to code of conduct required for a professional in this area of expertise.
Error: weherein Suggestion: wherein
Sentence: Addtionally, there could be chances that other news center take on an innovative approach to pass on information that arrests the attention of the viewers than this station.Therefore, the comppalints of the viewers have to be taken into consideration before making a suggestion to resolve the issue.
Error: comppalints Suggestion: complaints
Sentence: Moreover, it has been stated that the station lost several advetising contracts with local bussinesses.
Error: bussinesses Suggestion: businesses
Error: advetising Suggestion: advertising
Sentence: However, it is iilogical to suggest that it was due to increased time for national news.
Error: iilogical Suggestion: illogical
Sentence: Advertising their firm and busiinesses on natpnal news leads them to be more popular on a national clae which could prove beneficial for them.
Error: busiinesses Suggestion: businesses
Error: natpnal Suggestion: natural
Error: clae Suggestion: clay
Sentence: However, the reasons for their withdrwal could be due the tensions between the mangament of the advertising comany and the station.
Error: mangament Suggestion: management
Error: comany Suggestion: company
Error: withdrwal Suggestion: withdrawal
Sentence: Moreover, it could be that their adevertiments had less screen time that forced them to take an action.
Error: adevertiments Suggestion: developments
Sentence: It is also hihly possible that they must have given advertiaments to news stations with higher viewership.
Error: hihly Suggestion: highly
Error: advertiaments Suggestion: advertisements
Error: viewership Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To conclude, several factors must be taken ito consideration while suggesting a solution for the above arguement.
Error: ito Suggestion: its
Error: arguement Suggestion: argument
Sentence: Without providing adequate arguements such as those presented above the above memorandum is severely undermined.
Error: arguements Suggestion: arguments
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argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- Need to argue against the conclusion always. For this topic it is:
Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
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flaws:
the introduction is too long.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 20 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 505 350
No. of Characters: 2557 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.74 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.063 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.726 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 183 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 153 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.849 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.504 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
The above argument i a memorandum stated by the businees mana...
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Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... above argument i a memorandum stated by the businees manager of a television sta...
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Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...usinees manager of a television station.According to the memorandum, time alotted to the ...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e natonal news segment was increased at the the cost of decreased local and weather new...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e natonal news segment was increased at the the cost of decreased local and weather new...
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Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
... received were mainly pertaining to the stations coverage of weather and local news. In ...
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Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... coverage of weather and local news. In addition it has been stated that, several local ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...nceled their contracts with the station.The memeorandum comes with a solution to ...
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Line 1, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h the station.The memeorandum comes with a solution to restore the tme devoted t...
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Line 1, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he memeorandum comes with a solution to restore the tme devoted to weather and l...
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Line 1, column 761, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rease in viewership. Though the solution seems to solve the issue when read throu...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omplaints were recieved from the viewers during the time of late- night news prog...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ng the time of late- night news program.It is also stated that these were concerne...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...ated that these were concerned with the stations coverage of weather and local news. How...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perative to understand the complaints of viewers. There are chances werein, the q...
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Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t content and those with pressing issues , the stations coverage of news may be bl...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...nt and those with pressing issues , the stations coverage of news may be blant and munda...
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Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...verage of news may be blant and mundane.Moreover the are chances werein more advertiseme...
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Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...verage of news may be blant and mundane.Moreover the are chances werein more advertiseme...
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Line 3, column 712, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tisements are played at the time of news therby less information being communicat...
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Line 3, column 962, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...required for a professional in this area of expertise. Addtionally, there could b...
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Line 3, column 1151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...ention of the viewers than this station.Therefore, the comppalints of the viewers have to...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on to resolve the issue. Moreover, it has been stated that the station lost se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 55.5748502994 133% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2610.0 2260.96107784 115% => OK
No of words: 500.0 441.139720559 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93908092107 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 204.123752495 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 705.55239521 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.5005325427 57.8364921388 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 119.503703932 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.70786347227 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320469814451 0.218282227539 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100134563085 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105299825033 0.0701772020484 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180961378542 0.128457276422 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1180502424 0.0628817314937 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.3799401198 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 98.500998004 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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