Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies.
The argument tells us that the Pirouettes Ballet School is the chosen by many of the children in Elmtown. The argument also tells us about their teachers and their background as well as their various students. While choosing a school people always do a background check of how good the school and it's reputation in that sector. The argument tells us only about Pirouettes Ballet School of the Elmtown but fails to tell us about other ballet school and why is Pirouettes being chosen over them.
Pirouettes Ballet school is preferred by many children and their might be a specific reason for it. There are many question that arise such as fees of the school, the exposure it provides to children if they want to become a professional dancer. On the basis of the argument if parents are enrolling their children in such a school they might have enquired about many schools and would have chosen this school over others. In todays world, word-of-mouth advertisements are given much importance maybe because of it many parents might have decided for enrolling their child in this particular school.
Fees play very important while enrolling because everyone cannot afford hefty tuition fees. Children have their school and other curriculum studies as well so their available only specific time, this school might be adapting and giving preference to it and because of this reason also many children might be enrolling. Teachers reputation is very important for a school to be renowned, teachers in this school might have prodigious knowledge in this field and might be eloquent in it. Every parent want their child to always get the best, and because the teachers having considerate standing in this field, it might be the teacher because of whom the children are getting enrolled in the school. For example: XYZ school is renowned for its particular expertise in a field the students having interest in that field will always prefer and fight for a prominent institute.
Every school is evaluated on how much exposure are they providing to their students. Based on their past record of students becoming renowned in that particular profession, this school might be preferred over other schools. There are various such reasons that every parent or student might think or come across in their mind. But this evaluation doesn't mean that other schools are not good, they might also be good but this school might be the best. Now-a-days participating in competitions is very important, this school might be taking care of student personal interest and encouraging them to participate which might also be one of the specifics because of which students might be enrolling there.
Therefore, from all the questions are reasonable and should be considered while taking the decision. The school seems to be prominent in its field and can be considered for enrolling children who are interest. One might think of many more arguments while evaluating their decision but the above suggestions are enough to consider the school.
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 15 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 499 350
No. of Characters: 2479 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.726 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.968 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.537 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 177 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.762 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.38 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'many questions'.
Suggestion: many questions
... be a specific reason for it. There are many question that arise such as fees of the school, ...
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Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ross in their mind. But this evaluation doesnt mean that other schools are not good, t...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...an be considered for enrolling children who are interest. One might think of many more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.6327345309 168% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 28.8173652695 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2528.0 2260.96107784 112% => OK
No of words: 498.0 441.139720559 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07630522088 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57544661669 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.393574297189 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 705.55239521 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8640898659 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.380952381 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223978981495 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954386560925 0.0743258471296 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656003179217 0.0701772020484 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152355594795 0.128457276422 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630495272094 0.0628817314937 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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