"The population on Balmer Island doubles during the summer months. During the summer, then, the town council of Balmer Island should decrease the maximum number of moped rentals allowed at each of the island's six moped and bicycle rental companies from 5

The author of this statement asserts that limiting the number of moped from 50 per day to 30 per day in summer would reduce the increasing moped accident in summer. The author think this would surely work out the problem because neighboring island have adopted the same solution last year and was able to decrease number of moped accident. But, the reason provide by author is not convincing and have superficial analysis.
Firstly, the author did not present the clear scenario of the accident. He has just told present the number of accident involving moped and pedestrian is increasing. But he has not clearly shown that the accident is because of the number of moped in the street. It might be the case that the pedestrian of balmer island are not careful enough. So, the authorize person should concern about the maintenance of rules and regulation for both moped and pedestrians. It would surely reduce the accident if pedestrians/moped did not interfere each other.
Secondly, author could not come to conclusion with reference to Torseu island. The both island would not have same geographical structures and number of population. Torseu island might have adopted different solution for this problem at first such as proper rules and regulation for both pedestrian/moped but it would not have worked out because of their small road width. Thus, at end they have left with only option to limit the moped and it worked out because main reason of accident was small road width. However, this cannot be the reason of accident in the balmer island.
Thirdly, summer months are very significant months for people of balmer island and island's economy as must of tourist visit in these months. So, limiting the moped would be hectic for tourists to visit island which leads to decrement of tourists on island each year. Consequently, it will directly or indirectly harm the economic status of the island and limiting moped in island would turn out to be more expensive solution for accidents than maintaining rules and regulation for pedestrian and moped.
Thus, author should analyze every aspects of the issue and then only come to the conclusion. Maintaining rules and regulation for both moped and pedestrian would mitigate this issue but if this solution would not able to reduce accident then he can think about the solution which have worked out for neighboring island.

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Average: 5 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...ng moped accident in summer. The author think this would surely work out the problem ...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the case that the pedestrian of balmer island are not careful enough. So, the a...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mer island are not careful enough. So, the authorize person should concern about the mainten...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: MODAL_OF[1]
Message: It's never correct to use "of" after a modal verb. Use 'must have', or, in informal register, 'must've'.
Suggestion: must have; must've
...of balmer island and islands economy as must of tourist visit in these months. So, limi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, such as, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 396.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58442170266 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421717171717 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0733022658 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.684210526 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 23.324526521 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.70786347227 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.88822355289 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242626641618 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925672593527 0.0743258471296 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518031964528 0.0701772020484 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155310251046 0.128457276422 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441307681729 0.0628817314937 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 398 350
No. of Characters: 1947 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.467 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.892 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.419 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.947 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.624 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.737 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.365 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.365 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5