"A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep the executives need and the success of their firms. Of the advertising firms studied, those whose executives reported needing no more than 6 hours of sleep per night had higher profit margins and faster growth. These results suggest that if a business wants to prosper, it should hire only people who need less than 6 hours of sleep per night."
"The above statement suggests that individuals require less sleeping hours are showing better results.", this statement is not having a firm ground as it is based upon the multiple assumptions that have a clear logical problem.
Firstly, the company over here is presuming it that the people who are giving less time to sleep are providing more time to their work, their forgetting the fact that the employees have their own life too and are not just mear slaves performing a single duty their entire life. A survey conducted in India has shown that 40 percent of the employees are dealing with depression due to the burden of their work institutions. the bosses need to stop burdening the people of their respective groups with excessive tasks.
On the other hand, sleep is a necessary element for every individual. Judging someone on getting apmple sleep is like juding people's capability on the amount of food they eat. Just imaginge an interviewer asking how many hours do you sleep. There is no chapter in any psychology book that relates taking rest less than 6 hours per night with the capacity of the work which someone can perform.
Alot of companies in Japan and other parts of the world are providing extra nap time to their executives, according to the above theory they should perform in a disasstrous manner but the performnce charts of these companies show a different story that from the time they have started providing extra sleeping time they are performing even better in the market.
Furthermore, the advertising executives are required to do planning at high levels, so if a person is not able to plan his day to get minimum 6 hours of sleep then it just clearly shows that he would not be able to plan efficiently on a major level to make marketing strategies which are money efficient and attractive to the targeted audiance.
To conclude, the above stated criteria for understanding the capability of individuals is not appropriate. The above points clearly, represent that a person's efforts can't be judged on the sleeping hours.
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 349 350
No. of Characters: 1681 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.322 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.817 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.587 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.444 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.346 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... the burden of their work institutions. the bosses need to stop burdening the peopl...
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Line 6, column 166, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...early, represent that a persons efforts cant be judged on the sleeping hours.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 349.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93123209169 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69919211042 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58452722063 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.0019063 57.8364921388 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.416666667 119.503703932 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 23.324526521 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.70786347227 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223984324067 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709315501878 0.0743258471296 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339584785202 0.0701772020484 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966687702409 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378883842186 0.0628817314937 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 12.3882235529 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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