The best way for Society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them sense of cooperation and not competition.
The above recommendation has firm grounds as competition takes birth from envy and jealosy and cooperation takes birth from love and harmony.
For any institution or company or government to be successful we require people to perform their tasks together, eg: If the government leaders believe in competiton they would only work during the time of elections to increase their vote bank more as compared to their opposition leader, The leaders would never come on common grounds even if the decision is for the well fare of the society. They would just be believing that we should get the credit for implimenting this decision and not the rival party.
In coorporate sector their are two types of companies, first provides incentives and to their employees to work better. Second provides deadlines to their employees to complete the task in the given time. Now, the first type of company forms the feeling of rivalry between their employees and the second forms a feeling of unity, as the incentives can only be provided to one worker in a group and deadlines are for everyone. A survey conducted in 2012 in Japan proved that people work better if they are under same work conditions.
People who are against the above suggestion would say that competition encourages people to work better in every field as they always have someone to compare themselves to. These individuals are ignoring a major fact that competition many times turns out to be voilent as a lot of political protests and roits occur between polictical parties. In Geeta (the holy book of hindu religion), it said that the struggle to be better leads to destruction.
In a nutshell, it is better to work in a united world as compared to a world where each person compares himself to be better than his competitors and keeps running an unending race which is not even leading to the benifit of the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ctions to increase their vote bank more as compared to their opposition leader, Th...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ll fare of the society. They would just be believing that we should get the credit for impli...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...he rival party. In coorporate sector their are two types of companies, first provi...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...han his competitors and keeps running an unending race which is not even leading ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86604361371 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63226787265 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7218102024 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110004207373 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380072182839 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377023533838 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546147172036 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380856984557 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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