Several charitable organizations in Pleasantville provide opportunities for teenagers to engage in community service. These organizations have a great need for volunteers, but in recent years, the number of teenage volunteers has significantly declined.
The Pleasantville School Board should take measures to increase the number of volunteers. Teachers, parents, and other community members agree that it is important for young people to learn the value of community service. Requiring high school students to engage in community service would provide much-needed assistance to worthy local charities and would also help young people understand the importance of giving back to their community. For this reason, the Pleasantville School Board should institute a program requiring students of Pleaant ville High School to complete 40 hours of community service prior to graduation.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
This Argument concludes that , the Pleasantville school board should take measures to increase the number of volunteers of community service for that Pleasantville school board offered a program requiring students of Pleasantville high school to complete 40 hours of community service prior to graduation.however in argument is not mentioned about why 40 hours of community service , it can be less so there is clear explanation about 40 hours so we can say there are many flaws in argument.
First of all, argument does not indicate about how they measure number of volunteers.however community service can not need for graduation. and It is possible that it can totally depend upon student whether they want to do community service or not.although there is not mentioned about interest of student in community service Before conclusion , means for completion of graduation there is need of community service has not mentioned at initialization.
Secondly, the author assume that Teacher and parents agree with decision of Pleasantville school for community service but in earlier there is not explanation about actually parents agree with decision or not whether it is possible that some of them might not agreed with decision of Pleasantville school.and author also assume that it is important for students to learn community service for better future but there is not clear justification for that.
Thirdly , the author cited that after community also helpful student worthy local charities service and also mentioned there is a need for help to worthy local charities and would also help people understand the importance of giving back their community bur there is possibility of that community could be handled by at school level there is not mentioned about why they need other local charities for volunteering activity.
Finally ,the argument claims that for completion of graduation student have to done 40 hours of community service prior that but not justify clearly about hours and it can less hours than mentioned in argument and mentioned bout giving back this is not justified. In conclusion,that author has not given enough evidence for support the claims and not clearly prove reason for student need community service and not provide enough evidence for assumption.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Always put a space after punctuation marks.
Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 362 350
No. of Characters: 1900 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.362 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.249 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.883 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 60.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.259 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.572 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.911 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.24 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
This Argument reports concludes that , t...
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Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
This Argument reports concludes that , the Pleasantville school board should t...
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Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... about why 40 hours of community service , it can be less so there is clear explan...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... there are many flaws in argument. First of all, argument does not indicate...
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Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ty service can not need for graduation. and It is possible that it can totally dep...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aduation. and It is possible that it can totally depend upon student whether they...
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Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t in community service Before conclusion , means for completion of graduation ther...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is possible that some of them might not agreed with decision of Pleasantville sc...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lear justification for that. Thirdly , the author cited that after community a...
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Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...giving back their community bur there is possibility of that community could be h...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...harities for volunteering activity. Finally ,the argument claims that for co...
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Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...for volunteering activity. Finally ,the argument claims that for completion ...
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Line 11, column 175, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
... justify clearly about hours and it can less hours than mentioned in argument and mentione...
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Line 11, column 175, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... justify clearly about hours and it can less hours than mentioned in argument and me...
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Line 11, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...ack this is not justified. In conclusion,that author has not given enough evidence fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 362.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36464088398 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96374924869 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408839779006 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.8473053892 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.442664179 57.8364921388 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.428571429 119.503703932 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.7142857143 23.324526521 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4285714286 5.70786347227 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1870938862 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114581504119 0.0743258471296 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343962394621 0.0701772020484 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122688472313 0.128457276422 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167306998154 0.0628817314937 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 14.3799401198 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 48.3550499002 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 12.197005988 200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.5979740519 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 12.3882235529 246% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.1389221557 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.