The owner of Juniper Cafe contents that the best strategy for them to save money and remain in business without having to eliminate jobs is by reducing the time of operation. Its so as it will reduce their expenditure on paying for utilities, emplyoee wages and other operating costs. The argument seems coherent at first glance;however, upon scrutiny, one understands that its based on flawed assumptions and premises.
The most glaring error is that the owner has assumed without any evidence that reducing the time of operation is the best strategy for them to save money and stay in business. He has failed to take into consideration opportunity costs of this decision. He should have considered other options as well like trying to increase his revenue by increasing his customer base, anlyazing various problems in his business which is affecting the revenue and then trying to eliminate them. Thus, by analyzing different options and taking into conideration opportunnity cost of every decision he should have come to an conclusion regarding what strategy will be best for his business. Thus, in the absence of such evidence, the argument become questionable.
In addition to this, he has not clearly mentioned what will the amount of savings from the reduction in usgae of utilities, reudction in emplyoee wages etc. He has jsut assumed that it will help him in reducing his expenditure.This shows that his argument is based on a faulty assumption Even if we assume that this is the best startegy and it will actually help in reducing costs one cannot ignore the fact that there are multiple other operating costs which eh ahs failed to bring into consideration For ex the biggest operating cost is the rent.Maybe he is facing such huge costs due to the high rent and by moving to a different location wolll help him inreudcing costs.
Evidently the argument is not well though of. He should have taken a decision by analyzing differnt options, taking into conisderation alll the operating costs and opportunity costs. Thus, he needs to reconstruct his argument by providing evidence for his assumptions. Only then the realibility of the aruguent will increase.
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Its so as it will reduce their expenditure on paying for utilities, emplyoee wages and other operating costs.
Error: emplyoee Suggestion: employee
Sentence: He should have considered other options as well like trying to increase his revenue by increasing his customer base, anlyazing various problems in his business which is affecting the revenue and then trying to eliminate them.
Error: anlyazing Suggestion: analyzing
Sentence: Thus, by analyzing different options and taking into conideration opportunnity cost of every decision he should have come to an conclusion regarding what strategy will be best for his business.
Error: conideration Suggestion: consideration
Error: opportunnity Suggestion: opportunity
Sentence: In addition to this, he has not clearly mentioned what will the amount of savings from the reduction in usgae of utilities, reudction in emplyoee wages etc. He has jsut assumed that it will help him in reducing his expenditure.This shows that his argument is based on a faulty assumption Even if we assume that this is the best startegy and it will actually help in reducing costs one cannot ignore the fact that there are multiple other operating costs which eh ahs failed to bring into
Error: jsut Suggestion: just
Error: emplyoee Suggestion: employee
Error: ahs Suggestion: ass
Error: usgae Suggestion: usage
Error: startegy Suggestion: strategy
Error: reudction Suggestion: reduction
Sentence: consideration For ex the biggest operating cost is the rent.Maybe he is facing such huge costs due to the high rent and by moving to a different location wolll help him inreudcing costs.
Error: inreudcing Suggestion: including
Error: wolll Suggestion: would
Sentence: He should have taken a decision by analyzing differnt options, taking into conisderation alll the operating costs and opportunity costs.
Error: alll Suggestion: ally
Error: differnt Suggestion: different
Error: conisderation Suggestion: consideration
Sentence: Only then the realibility of the aruguent will increase.
Error: aruguent Suggestion: argument
Error: realibility Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 18 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 362 350
No. of Characters: 1781 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.362 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.92 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.667 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.683 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.166 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liminate jobs is by reducing the time of operation. Its so as it will reduce thei...
^^^
Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...is by reducing the time of operation. Its so as it will reduce their expenditure ...
^^^
Line 6, column 125, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as well 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...d have considered other options as well like trying to increase his revenue by incre...
^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd taking into conideration opportunnity cost of every decision he should have co...
^^^
Line 8, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...f every decision he should have come to an conclusion regarding what strategy will...
^^
Line 12, column 26, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...l help him in reducing his expenditure.This shows that his argument is based on a f...
^^^^
Line 14, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Maybe
... the biggest operating cost is the rent.Maybe he is facing such huge costs due to the...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 28.8173652695 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 359.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12534818942 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83262393387 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49860724234 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.446962139 57.8364921388 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.428571429 119.503703932 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 23.324526521 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.70786347227 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 5.15768463074 252% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140123235887 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047065245683 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445848949932 0.0701772020484 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527075837204 0.128457276422 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479150607668 0.0628817314937 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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