The board of directors of Monarch books have recommended that opening a cafe, by closing children's book section, can boost their business more than previous. They have showed some reasons to bolster their point why it is necessary. However, it sounds like enough to concede with author but a careful scrutiny reveals some logical flaws that must be considered. Hence, the argument can be unsubstantiated.
First of all, the board of Directors stated that the percentages of children's populations declination reported by National census. This result negatively influenced in children's book section thereby day to day it is becoming less popular. That's why discontinuing this section will not be a big issue. Using this part, opening a cafe will be helpful to attract more customers. But it is well known that children like reading books. Is there any correlation between number of children and sales of children's book? Fewer children never indicated or ensure less book sales. On the other hand, this report mainly showed covering whole nation but Monarch store situate in particular area. It is also noted that if this particular area's children decline or not.
Additionally, to compete with Regal books, is it necessary to follow their strategy? Perhaps, more customers are attracted for their cafe not their book collections. Probably, their book's store business was not satisfying therefore they took another approach to run their business. But the board of Directors of Monarch books was motivated by their increased customers without considering reasons behind that.
Finally, a survey should be conducted to know public demand about opening a cafe in book store. Monarch book store has already a large customer and wide selection of varieties books. They are running their business at a same place more than twenty years. Without a good view about this book store, it is not possible to retain this fame. So, every step, they changing, must be evaluated properly if any negative effects impacts on customers. People mainly come here to collect their desire books. If they have any tendency to read book there like as a library, then store authority can enhance facility as well customers want. In this case opening a cafe is an excellent idea to pass some time with a book there. One point should be added that, if opening a cafe is reasonable then it should be starting in adjacent place of book store without discontinuing children's section if possible.
In conclusion, the author argument is unpersuasive as it stands. To bolster it further, author must provide concrete evidence, perhaps by way of reliable detail investigation of this two book stores. Finally, to better evaluate the argument, it would be necessary to know more information about public demand on Monarch book store.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 29 15
No. of Words: 456 350
No. of Characters: 2291 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.621 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.024 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.614 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 170 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.724 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.152 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.517 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.269 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.447 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...day to day it is becoming less popular. Thats why discontinuing this section will not...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s. Probably, their books store business was not satisfying therefore they took another approach to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, in particular, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 55.5748502994 108% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 2260.96107784 104% => OK
No of words: 456.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15570175439 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67229377295 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 204.123752495 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515350877193 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 705.55239521 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 19.7664670659 147% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7347281291 57.8364921388 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0689655172 119.503703932 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.724137931 23.324526521 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65517241379 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258577512182 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722279707193 0.0743258471296 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763726254016 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147381386211 0.128457276422 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560300567525 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.3799401198 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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