Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The ‘Palean’ basket known for a particularly distinctive pattern have be a topic of discussion due to newly acquired information. The archaeologists have found evidence of presence of baskets in a village across the Brim river which is deep and difficult to cross. Though the presence matters, it is difficult to conclude the spread of this skill across villages.
The main point to be highlighted in this regard is the lacking evidence for the existence of boats. The Brim river is deep and wide, thus cannot be crossed by people without any support. Any transportation between the villages could be by a boat or a bridge . The important point to ponder here is that availability of an articraft in a place does not necessarily imply the presence of its manufacturers and also lack of evidence does not necessarily strife of the existence of the object. There might be many aspects of the life style and amenities used by the villagers still undiscovered and waiting to fill the unsolved mystery. The presence of any mode of transportation adds to the theory of migration which ultimately be the reason for distribution of the woven baskets in many villages.
The history has many pages yet to unfolded and any conclusion cannot be based on a single evidence.
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...of the woven baskets in many villages. The history has many pages yet to unfold...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 28.8173652695 17% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 2260.96107784 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 214.0 441.139720559 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95327102804 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0960956938 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 204.123752495 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 705.55239521 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6816895278 57.8364921388 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 23.324526521 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09551075846 0.218282227539 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393765248073 0.0743258471296 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564958305803 0.0701772020484 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661863475147 0.128457276422 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727024385209 0.0628817314937 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 98.500998004 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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