To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The society is represented by its people. One can study and understand the characteristics and traits of a society by studying the behavior,
culture and lifestyle of the people involved in that society. Cities serve a potential platform to understand the characteristics of a society
but do not entirely give an insight into their lives.
The major cities in any region comprises of people from all over the country and it proves to be a great resource in understanding the culture and
nuisances of the society. But, not all people are originally from that particular city. Urbanization and employment search has lead thousands of immigrants
to come to the cities in search of a way to feed their hunger and lead a normal life. With people from different parts of the country, the city acts as a melting
point where each person takes something from every culture offered and forms a hybrid which might not be as same as the inhabitants. New York serves as a perfect example
where people from every part of the world settle there, bringing their own culture which has now resulted in a new 'New York culture' which is far different from the rest
of the country.
Another major reason why the cities cannot be considered as only resource is the structure of work-ethics in major cities. The major cities in every country
is buzzing all the time irrespective of night and day such that they are turning into a factory with humans acting as robots caring out their chores mechanically.
Each person has the same routine and is in a rush to wind up the day as soon as possible. In this situation, the real traits of the society takes a back step and hides
in a corner of the city trying to make its way.
The cities do not provide any deep insight on how the society works in that particular region. However, with people from different race, culture and ethnicity all
gathering together under a single roof does enlighten us of the diversity present in the region. Different cultures can be introduced and later studied from the cities.
But, the real heart of the society lies in its rural areas. If one wants to know how exactly a society behaves, the extensive study must be done of its rural areas.
They preserve the raw emotions and spirit of a society and shower us with minute details of its people. We learn their culture, enjoy in their celebrations and understand the
deep values rooted in the society though the rural life.
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...erstand the characteristics of a society but do not entirely give an insight into...
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...rely give an insight into their lives. The major cities in any region comprises...
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... The major cities in any region comprises of people from all over the country and it...
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...esource in understanding the culture and nuisances of the society. But, not all p...
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... search has lead thousands of immigrants to come to the cities in search of a way...
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... the country, the city acts as a melting point where each person takes something ...
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...own culture which has now resulted in a new New York culture which is far different fro...
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...ure which is far different from the rest of the country. Another major reason...
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...ferent from the rest of the country. Another major reason why the cities cann...
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... the society takes a back step and hides in a corner of the city trying to make i...
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...er of the city trying to make its way. The cities do not provide any deep insig...
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...ced and later studied from the cities. But, the real heart of the society lies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74299065421 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57135376915 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471962616822 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3567178213 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.842105263 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05263157895 5.21951772744 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131236324381 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443333628525 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360652050023 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0448802969824 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351090687952 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.