The following was written by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. At present, the nearest jazz club is over 60 miles away from Monroe; thus, our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself. In addition, there is ample evidence of the popularity of jazz in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly.' Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. We therefore predict that the C Note cannot help but make money."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
In this argument authours predict that a jazz music club in Monroe would be a profitable organization. They cites about a nationwide study, which is related to the annual expenses on jazz entertaiment, done by its fans. Though their claim may well have credit, the authors present a poorly reasoned argument based on several questionable assumptions and premises. Solely based on the evidence provided by the authors we cannot claim their argument as valid.
To begin with, unquestioning in the argument is the assumption, that the nationwide study of annual expenses of the jazz fans reflects the ...
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Sentence: In this argument authours predict that a jazz music club in Monroe would be a profitable organization.
Error: authours Suggestion: authors
Sentence: This claim doesn't make a convincing case as it is based on dubious and confutative assumptions.
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