There is famous saying: when in Rome, dress like Romans. This saying was apt for past generations, but with advancement in technology the cities nowadays contain multiple cultures. In my opinion, cities are not true presentation of a nation's culture, true traditions are reflected by villages and suburb areas. Latter preserves the cultural traditions and thus, government should take care of progress of these places along with development of the cities. I would like to explain this further in the following lines.
First and foremost, with advancement in technology people are connecting with each other all over world, and the world has become smaller and closer than ever. Due to this, people are getting chance to travel and settle where they like to. The reason to it may be job or leading a prosperous life. Today, a city is composed of various culture, as people from various parts are settled in it. For example, is it justifiable to study Paris if one wants to know regarding the french culture ? I believe that answer to this question is a no. Paris is a fashion hub; thus, it is home to fashion designers from all around the world. Many people settle in another country due to inhospitable conditions in their homeland. Moreover, in cities people from different country marry each other. Their children do not know regarding the culture of either of their parent's country. Thus, it is not right to say that nation's cultural traditions are preserved in cities, as it is villages and suburb areas which still follow the traditions and rituals of the past as the residents belong to that country.
Besides this, lets take another example of Hong Kong which was developed in the reign of Britishers. Though Chinese are known to keep their cultural traditions intact, Hong Kong is home of many people from all over the world due to availability of job opportunities; hence, consists of many cultures. Therefore, study of this city will not provide insight knowledge of the Chinese culture.
Last but not the least, study of cities of earlier civilizations provide fathom knowledge about the traditional culture. The felicitous example here is, study of Harappa civilization. It provided plenty information about it, as people of that time did not used to travel much so they followed their own traditions and customs religiously. There was no mixture of customs among different societies.
To sum up, if one want to preserve a nation's traditions it is villages where customs are still present. Due to technology advancement cities no longer possesses a single tradition, but amalgamation of different cultures. Therefore, one wants to know about traditions they should refer villages over cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08968609865 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72702622316 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495515695067 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0923221102 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73076923077 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181957743788 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475023530969 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515676838123 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110599226188 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284137108437 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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