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Corporations inevitably degrade the environment in which they operate and it is their duty to promote the well-being of their society. A corporation that works only for profit is bound to fail.
Consider a factory that manufactures pesticides. The effluents of their industrial processes are usually dumped into nearby rivers, often without proper treatment of the waste. This can have deleterious effects on its surrounding environment. If a corporation focuses only on making profit, and does not spend time thinking about how it can properly treat and dispose off its waste, it will eventually lead to the insurrection of the residents in surrounding areas, causing the factory to be closed.
Pollution is not only caused by the stereotypical factories that one imagines, with tall, grey chimneys belching out smoke. Even a rather modern establishment such as a data center can cause harmful effects to its surroundings. A data center most often houses tens of thousands of computers that run continuously for years. This requires a colossal amount of electricity. Data centers can minimize its environmental footprint by using renewable sources of energy to power their machines.
In some cases, the areas surrounding a corporation get developed automatically as a result of the corporations work. For example, a newly discovered coal mine in close proximity to a once isolated hamlet will aid in its development. This is mainly because a majority of the blue collar workers of the company will be living near the mines and they would need an adequate level of urbanization for the surrounding forested areas to be considered liveable. Similarly, Palo Alto was a rather sleepy town in California, prior to the computer science boom in the early 90’s. Today, Palo Alto is a high end neighbourhood with real estate costs being almost prohibitive. This is happened due to world famous tech giants such as Facebook and Microsoft, opening campuses near the area.
Nevertheless, it is still in a corporation’s best interest to develop the environment around it. It can be considered as an activity that sets the corporation’s moral compass in the right direction. This is evident from the environmental protection programs that are spearheaded by multinational companies such as general electric. Nowadays, being environmentally conscious has become a matter of prestige for large companies. No large industry wants to portray itself as a dystopian establishment, seeking to destroy nature in its quest for personal gain. Rather, companies are wary about their image in society, as it is a form of advertising and appealing to people’s subconscious thoughts.
I believe that it is every corporation’s duty to protect and nurture the environment that hosts it. If not for mother earth, we do not have a place to go and we must ensure that we are doing our best both as individuals and corporations to maintain our home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oft, opening campuses near the area. Nevertheless, it is still in a corporati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, well, as to, for example, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2499.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30573248408 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26365846726 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583864118896 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3441242059 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.96 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.84 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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