Should all parents be required to volunteer time to their children's schools?
A Recent scientific study showed that a good parenting will often result in sowing
seeds of greater temperament and habits on to their children. Some people may argue
that parents volunteering mandatory to schools afflict burden and stress onto the
parents. while, others may argue by saying that parenting improves the lives of the
family altogether. On evaluating both the sides, I feel that parents should be requested
to volunteer to their children's school not mandatory but on a request since they do
have their busy jobs and life to take care of.
To Begin, Parents spending some time onto the children will inflict them to feel secure
more confident, and, be productive on their academic activities and other curricular activities
as well. Let us consider a children who plays soccer match for instance. The child who
comes to the match with his parent will certainly feel confident that there is someone who
believes in him more than anybody. Observing their children in the field will also help parents
to evaluate their children's weakness and strength. This will lead parents to help their
children to rectify their mistakes they have made in the field. Thus overall, parents on spending
time with their children will boost the ability of children and will make him to believe in achieving
greater heights.
Secondly, Parents on spending time with their progeny will ease out the relation between parents
and their children. A study showed that parents should at least spend 2 hours of speaking with
their children in a day. Sometimes lack of spending the time with their children will result in a
misunderstanding of their parents by their children. An ingrown habit that has been watered and
grown from the childhood till the adulthood will determine the temperament of a child. A child
who is an introvert, is happened to be so not by random pick; There is some reason to it. A reason
that points to the way in which he was brought by none other than his parents. Same is the reason
for children who does felony or grave crime. This all examples points to the fact that parents
on spending good quality time with their children will soften their characters in a good way and
make a good citizen out of them.
Some may argue by stating that making parents to spend time in their children school mandatorily
will unnecessarily put burden onto their parents. I genuinely, concord with this statement that
parents should not be mandated but requested to spend time on their children school. As we all
know parenting is a tough job to do and they do as well have their own work pressure and some other
activities they like on their own.
To conclude, Parents by spending time in their children school will do nothing but benefit their
children by boosting their academic, co-curricular performance, and also, their confidence. Since parents
also doesn't have enough time every single day of their life they can be requested to volunteer at whatever
time they feel comfortable. Thus by requesting them to volunteer will ease the burden on them. A good time
with their children will also establishes a nice family nexus between parents and their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Suggestion: a child; children
...ar activities as well. Let us consider a children who plays soccer match for instance. Th...
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...a good citizen out of them. Some may argue by stating that making parents to spend...
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...erformance, and also, their confidence. Since parents also doesnt have enough time e...
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..., their confidence. Since parents also doesnt have enough time every single day of th...
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'establish'
Suggestion: establish
...ood time with their children will also establishes a nice family nexus between parents and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, at least, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2768.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03272727273 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53128785045 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418181818182 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 798.3 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8846153846 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 36.0 4.97078651685 724% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552586663861 0.243740707755 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209276603298 0.0831039109588 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193995875779 0.0758088955206 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180624262797 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178835869455 0.0667264976115 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.