All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Family time is one of the most important aspect which enables us to discuss their day and keep a buttress bond within the family. Parent’s duty for their family is not only bringing money to the table but to acknowledge each other’s welfare.
To begin with, people who are well-educated know the importance of their children well-being. In addition, there are lot of issues which the children face during their childhood. These issue if aren’t resolved can lead to traumatised them in their early stages. Even a small issue can hinder a child’s growth. It depends on student how he takes it to make it nullify and strong for tomorrow. For example, if a student is being raged by his peers in school and if he is not considering the problems to their parents. This can have a detrimental effect on child’s growth.
Secondly, child seeks most of his behaviour from his parents. More than half percentage he imbibes the values and deeds from their family. Rest of the behaviour are imbibed by their friends. If parents aren’t careful and stringent about their influence from friends then there might be possibility that he may take some irrelevant steps which could only lead to self-destruction. Drugs can be one of the main harmful effects to child’s life. Solicitude from parents can save a child’s upbringing.
However, after a point in life, there should be enough trust and healthy equation between parents and child. Even if parents save their child during rudimentary stages there is no guarantee that their child won’t do any infelicitous things. Trust and strong connection between them helps the child to explore propitious things in future.
In conclusion, there should be enough confidence and faith from parents after a certain age which shouldn’t be improvident. Nevertheless, parents concern for their child during apotheosis ages must be considered.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...thy equation between parents and child. Even if parents save their child during rudimen...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... the child to explore propitious things in future. In conclusion, there should be enough...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing apotheosis ages must be considered.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12297734628 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75294035082 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6439027825 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.15 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266524818123 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785314296921 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578623946403 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153534153186 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392660707272 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...thy equation between parents and child. Even if parents save their child during rudimen...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... the child to explore propitious things in future. In conclusion, there should be enough...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing apotheosis ages must be considered.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12297734628 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75294035082 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6439027825 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.15 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266524818123 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785314296921 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578623946403 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153534153186 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392660707272 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.