All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Parents taking time to their children’s school looks like a very unique idea and as a student I would always want this to happen. But, this might have some practical issues.
Hypothetically, if we assume that parents come to school to volunteer, it’s going to be a very varied experience for them. Parents have had a very different experience of school in their days. They had to walk to their school, teachers were allowed to hit students. They used to follow their teachers in all aspects. Students had only textbooks to study and Library was a boon to them. But now things have changed completely. Every student in High School has some gadget that keeps him connected to the internet. They have the freedom to study or read or watch or listen to whatever they want. This has completely changed the roles of school. And with that, the roles of parents has also changed. If the internet is a boon or bane is another debatable topic. Parents need to keep a check on what their children are upto. Parents are exposing their children to internet at a very young age. But children are naive by them. They might get attracted to many wrong things. Internet is the new age electricity. To quote the famous line of Spiderman “With great power comes great responsibility.” This is the responsibility of the parents till their children become mature enough to define right and wrong. Interaction with teachers will help them understand the new generation. Teachers always have the knowledge of what the current generation is upto and what the next generation is going to be.
In Urban areas of India, the nuclear family system is more popular. Such families have both parents working. Students are in their school for 8-10 hours and with their parents for hardly 3-4 hours. Parents coming to school is going to give a positive message to the children. Sometimes, proving someone that you love them is by giving something precious; like time. Students face many difficulties in school. Every child is unique but curriculum is standard for everyone. Not everyone is going to do well. If at such times parents come to support their children, they will not feel stressed.
A parents teachers committee can have a huge impact on understanding the needs of children and bringing according changes to the curriculum. We see children blaming their parents for their failure. Children leave their parents for not understanding them. All this will be reduced by this one small step.
It is difficult for the parents to take time but if they try it is always possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89269406393 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69331310643 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502283105023 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4946848565 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.2285714286 118.986275619 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5142857143 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.828571428571 5.21951772744 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.83258426966 372% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170838506948 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455979911208 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415306275488 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105140992487 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357372192501 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 14.1392134831 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.19 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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