All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A company works because of its employees. The better standards the employees set for themselves, the more efficiently the company will run. Also to operate it more efficiently the company has to hire consultants to guide them in different consequential ways. So yes, a company hiring outside consultants to help them operate the company is necessary.
In such competitive times, more often than not employees are not well aware of the market standards or the client requirements. Many times, employees don't have that knowledge to provide inputs for the company. Therefore, it's better to hire consultants than to go bake the cake with half knowledge because companies whether it be a small scale or large scale always deals with a good turnover according to its capacity, losing client or money is dangerous.
There is also another reason to hire consultants. Consultants are well paid employees who have better knowledge of the market standards set according to each company and provide variety of solutions to a single problem. A consultants job is to provide consultations on different problems faced by a company. Therefore there is a good chance that the problem a particular company is facing, the consultant already knows how to solve it. So, a lot of time is also saved for a company to put it's employees in solving it.
Sometimes, the company doesn't have the resources also. Assume an IT company that needs to deliver a product to client and has some improvements to make in its front-end UI designing part. In a short notice a company can't train its programming developers to learn UI designing so it outsources it to a designing company with the help of a consultant who understands the requirements of the company and will help the company to deliver its product on time.
Therefore, I will like to conclude that it's better for a company to hire outside consultants to suggest them ways on how to operate a company more efficiently than to lose in such a competitive market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97023809524 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93204763684 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443452380952 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.761551817 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364182405339 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144811725384 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900368145767 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249163166799 0.150359130593 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978393177807 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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