I completely agree with strategy of companies to hire outside consultants for the company to operate more efficiently.I come to this conclusion based on the following reasonings which are detailed in the subsequent paragraphs.
The companies can have access to large number of people with varied talents if they were to hire consultants. This is because there will be multiple companies which handles the consultant business model in almost all domains. These consulting firms are specifically built to have talents that are well versed in their own domains.Moreover the competition between multiple other companies which operate in the similar domain causes the companies to become more creative so as to increase their business. For example lets take semiconductor industry. There are hundreds of chipmakers in the world. All of them use almost similar software tools for their Research and Development. If they were to develop their own tools its a waste of time because there is a time spent on development and also resource wasted. Instead the chip makers can hire external software vendors and have one or two consultants who can support everyone who uses the software tool in the chip making company. If chip maker wants some other tool they can have an expert in that domain. Thus the possibilities are endless. The talent pool of consultants in virtually vast. This can make the companies to excel at what they are doing instead of wasting time on other operations.This will not hold true in cases of the business when there are no consultanting firms are not present for that domain. Such as lets say a weapons manufacturing , rocket building companies which have limited consumer market and confidentiality problems are present in that business.
Secondly if the company doent want to operate in that business domain anymore then they can simply cancel the contracts and can save significant Research and Development cost involved. If they were to do the same thing with thier employees it can cost them in terms of severence and other costs incurred. For example, a real estate company can hire people such as architects , civil engineers who can help them in their new architecural marvel developement and can have a contract saying that once the project is completed they will let them go. This wont affect the consultants job because they can be hired by some other company. This definitely saves the real estate company some money because they dont have hire new guy and train them and listen to thier inputs once they have required skill.
Furthermore If the comapany has to listen to its own employees for a particular task which they can get it done from consultants at a much faster rate. This definitely helps the company be at the front of the market compared to other players in the same domain.
With the abovementioned reasons i can definitely say that if the companies were to hire outside consultants for the company to operate more efficiently it would definitely excel in what they do since they can save money which would have wasted in hiring and training new employees, also not much time wasted in listening to their employees for a mediocre operating plan which can get it done from consultants at a much faster and efficient way.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241258741259 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.176573426573 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0874125874126 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0506993006993 0.0497285424764 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0541958041958 0.0444667217837 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115384615385 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0402097902098 0.0406280797675 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75908244958 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332167832168 0.030933414821 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0996503496503 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0367132867133 0.0249443105267 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0262237762238 0.0148568991511 177% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3281.0 2732.02544248 120% => OK
No of words: 548.0 452.878318584 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98722627737 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32299270073 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257299270073 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182481751825 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122262773723 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75908244958 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 219.290929204 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443430656934 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.9930410556 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9090909091 23.380412469 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.0946377094 59.4972553346 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.136363636 141.124799967 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 23.380412469 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.674092028746 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.21349557522 384% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.6390179164 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.4099378882 1.64882698954 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377834478855 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112894414642 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0806642187074 0.077325440228 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501402256184 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.223593409332 0.149214159877 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140393259889 0.161403998019 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11284169885 0.0892212321368 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.413283474436 0.385218514788 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0419703892882 0.0692045440612 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302093826813 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821039929032 0.0653680567796 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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