All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary

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All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary.

In this fast paced and technologically advanced world, it is of utmost importance that the company proves its capability to others. An organization is continuously working towards improving their product quality, reducing manufacturing prices, and thereby increasing profit levels of the company. The prompt recommends that, for improving company’s efficiency, an organization should take help from the outside experts rather than depending on their own employees. I strongly agree with the prompt for two main reasons that I will discuss in the following body paragraphs.
To begin, the officials from which the company wants to seek help are the ones who have been working with numerous multinational companies. Therefore, they have a vast array of improvement guidelines that can assist in company’s efficiency as well as help the organization to achieve its annual goals earlier than expected. In addition, the experts provide their unbiased opinions which are purely based on the current nature of the working environment of the company. For example, in a postal delivery compa-ny, if the workers are striking for an extra day off on Saturday, then they are not think-ing of the consequences that the company has to go through in terms of profits. Here, the employee’s decision is prejudiced and only benefits the workers. Hence, by hiring an outside authority for guidelines will be a better option for development of flawed ar-eas of the company.
Moreover, hiring advisers from outside company will be profitable in the long run. As the officials generally work on the contract-based positions, thus, making it highly ben-eficial for the company to pay them only for specific time frame. In fact, to hire the per-son equipped with vast experience in the field as a full-time worker would be burden-some for the organization because regular worker’s salary must be paid per month, whereas expert’s salaries are comparatively lesser than a permanent employee. As a result, the company will save tremendous amount of capital for the upcoming projects.
Further, third party consultants are widely in demand as they adhere to the required industry standards as well as they have proven output of their methodologies. Take for an example, Deloitte, it is a well-known organization that provides high-class auditing service, and their suggestions are meant to be always profitable for the respective company. Thus, in order to gain massive profits and acknowledgement from the indus-try market, each and every organization waits for their turn to get guidance from es-teemed companies such as Deloitte.
On the other hand, regular employees have a fair idea of functioning of their company more than the outside mentors. Hence, their contribution can play an integral role while solving the internal problems associated with the project. For instance, if a team is working together on an assignment and the project has been hampered by the exist-ing conflicts between two colleagues of the team. To solve such a problem, team leader can work towards it in a more effective manner than the outside instructor as he/she has proper idea about behaviors of his/her teammates.
To sum up, for maintaining company’s top standards and bolstering efficiency, the new technical guidance must be taken from the outside consultants to achieve pinnacle of success. While it is true that instructor may help company to acquire desired incomes and profits, the regular employees are the ones who knows few of the difficulties in the project. Therefore, a collective measure of the support from employees and outside mentors will be lucrative for the company’s smooth functioning.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3109.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 580.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36034482759 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0017488957 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518965517241 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 963.0 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3848852008 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.541666667 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.04166666667 5.21951772744 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320746845004 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910547757812 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552335633371 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17051735125 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038828544656 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 174.0 100.480337079 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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