Hiring outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently is beneficial to companies in many ways.I do not agree with the statement that if companies spent more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. While listening to their employees can be instrumental in improving the efficiency of the company it can't replace hiring of outside consultants. Opinions and suggestions of employees must be taken into consideration by the company as well as the consultants.
Consultants hired by companies are experts in giving suggestions that would improve the companies performance, they often have relevent degrees that the employees lack. They have a vast experience which they can use to improve the companies performance, their exposure to the working of many companies makes them ideal candidates to compare the company that has hired them to other suffessful companies that they have encountered and apply formulas that have worked in other companies to the company. Often companies face similar problems, a consultant having previous experience can come in handy and save time and resourses for the company.
Employees on the other hand are only well informed about their own company and may not be able to device new and innovative suggestions to improve the efficiency that are used in other companies. They may have a deeper understading of their own company and thus their suggestions should be given importannce. However, that shouldn't be the only effort that the makes to improve its efficiency.
Employees may also be averse to some suggestions that they know will improve the efficiency of the company but will make their work more demanding. Steps such as installing biometric attendance systems are well known to immprove the efficiency of companies, this also makes it tough for the employees to come to the office late everyday. There is little chance that employees would themselves suggest such steps as it will be inconvenient to them.
Consultants will have a more balanced approach and hence should be hired.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...is beneficial to companies in many ways.I do not agree with the statement that if...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... such consultants would be unnecessary. While listening to their employees can be ins...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...roving the efficiency of the company it cant replace hiring of outside consultants. ...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...roving the efficiency of the company it cant replace hiring of outside consultants. ...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ving suggestions that would improve the companies performance, they often have relevent d...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ience which they can use to improve the companies performance, their exposure to the work...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...uld be given importannce. However, that shouldnt be the only effort that the makes to im...
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Line 4, column 328, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...he employees to come to the office late everyday. There is little chance that employees ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26646706587 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90021488334 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458083832335 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2813450044 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.307692308 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443887555685 0.243740707755 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181519996499 0.0831039109588 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141193133747 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255459877909 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14667739853 0.0667264976115 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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