Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
the most important characteristic of an effective leader is that he is able to make sound moral judgements. It is what will help to run a country crisis free. when in need of a critical decision making we can always rely on a person with good morality and thinking skills.
The moral judgement is what will give birth to the law that runs the country. If a person with immoral judgement were to rule a country the laws will only be made for his own good and the people will suffer greatly. this is why i oppose the issue stated here, if an immoral person who respects his peers were to be made a leader the country will only suffer from all the immoral decisions taken. Before the moral judgement the respect given to peers stands low.
for example, the chief minister of madras state kamarajar was always known for his ethical and moral judgements. he was the one to introduce the free mid day meals provision in schools to promote education. though having such sound moral judgements he was also know for his rudeness among the peers, mainly because he absolutely disliked corrupted people and it caused him to show no repect to those people. If he were to give up his moral judgement for showing respect to is corrupted peers the state of madras would have lost a great leader who made several wonderful change for its development.
ofcourse a ethical and moral leader would have to respect even his peers equally as they are also the citizens of the country, but it doesnt make it the most important characteristic for a leader to have than implying moral judgements. thus although a leader should respect his peers it doesnt make it the most important characteristic to have like sound moral judgement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48749883381 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9413444313 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325711090935 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131971918091 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140341050726 0.0758088955206 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216502739765 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103490959751 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.