The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership roles in various fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The society holds the most important task of shaping up the young generation, and teaching the morales of life to them.One of the most morale quality of a leader that should be taught to them is to respect all of his organization's people without partiality. This prompt suggests that, The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership is by instilling them with a sense of cooperation, and not competition. In my opinion, I completely agree with this for two reasons.
First, A good leader is the one that knows what is good and not good for his people. This can only be accquired by cooperating with them. For example, The Chola dynasty of the 10th Century AD came to a still while choosing it's heir for the throne. The King had two princes, The elder brother Aditha Karikalan, and the younger Raja Raja Cholan. Both the prince possesed great qualities required to sit in the trhone. But, the elder brother Aditha Karikalan was excessively competitve with the nearby kingdoms and was always incilned towards waging wars. Due to those wars, the dynasty's economy was declining, and he didnt care much for this, as he was solely focused on winning over nearby countries. Alternatively, the younger brother, Raja Raja Cholan was fully aware of the country's crisis due to the wars and took full responsibilty to bring the country back up by cooperating with the people. This quality inspired the King and thus, The younger brother was made to sit the thone. From this we can state that the quality of being competitive is greater than than the cooperative ability of a leader.
Second, A leader should be cooperate even with the competitively opposing groups. As the leader should show no partiallity in treating his people, he should suppress his competitive senses even with the people who opposed to becoming a leader, only then wil the organization flourish. For instance, Kamarajar, the chief minister of the madras state was completely opposed by the suppressed people as he was of a different caste. But, if head kept up his competitive nature and went against those people after becoming the chief minister, the state's suppressed people would have obtained helpuful schemes like Mid-day meals. In this scheme, he stated that all the students who attend the government schools will be provided a mid day meals. As the suppressed people were suffering for even a single meal, this scheme were the children were both educated and provided a meal was really helpfull for them. Thus, suppressing one's competitve sense and being cooperative will help the country to grow.
Of course, some people might argue that a leader should first be competitve for winning terms with other countries, as that will help it people too. But, as we have seen from the above examples, eventhough a leader is being competitive for his own country's welfare, he might not know the effect it has on his people unless he is being cooperativee with them. Therefore, we can conclude that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership is by providing them with mental state of being cooperative rather than competitive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2612.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 534.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89138576779 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6339841691 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477528089888 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5960879423 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.565217391 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2173913043 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3220890975 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102520156195 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132569326751 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243146061119 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115011036806 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.