In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
The author claims that to make significant contribution in any field of enterprise or industries, one should be first inspired by the the past achievements within that particular field. I do not agree upon the author's claims.It is not only the influence of the past achievements in any fields which help the significant contributions given in that field.There are lot more things which overall help to make such contributions.We cannot denay the fact that,past achievements surely help to influence the contributor to boost up the confidence and make significant contribution, but it is not only the reason.
If we look at any industry or entriprise which have made miracles in particular fields, they all just started with nothing but the will power. There are no such past achievement for such newly started institution. Though the workforce make significant contributions in that fields. Such people are influenced by the idea and the change it will make in the peoples life.If we look at the example of mobile gaint Apple or Internet Search Gaint like Google, they have just started with an idea, but the impact there work will have on the society inspired them to build such innovative products.
Also we cannot deny the fact that, the past achievements surely help to influence the contributor to make significant contributions. Any employee working in any big industries gets highly influenced by the past achievements. This not only influence the contributor but also nurture a feeling of reponsibility that, they also have to make significant contribution in there respective work. But this doesnt mean that you need to strongly influenced by the past to make such contributions.
If person if highly enthauistic about rocket science and he is highly influenced by the work done in space organisation like NASA or SpaceX. Then it will highly motivate him to make significant contributions like reusable rockets,etc. Because if we see the concept of reusable rocket many thought it was a impossible task, but alean musk and his scientific team believe in that concepts and made it possible.
In conclusion we can say that, it is good to be strongly influenced by the past achievements within that fields which will helps to give significant contributions, but it also possible to make good amount of contribution without getting influenced by past achievements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11588079122 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467532467532 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.667699839 60.3974514979 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211090204841 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899636865403 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637103542563 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133712961179 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660916358939 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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