"In any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product."
Write the extent to which you agree of disagree with the statement, citing relevant examples.
We have often heard of the motivational quotation - It is the journey that matters more than the destination. The statement here means somewhat the same - where the author believes that in any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product.
However, the statement may not be universally true and one would like to consider the following evidences to bolster an alternate point of view that ultimately it is the final product that is of prime importance in any enterprise.
To illustrate this point, let us consider an example from the entertainment industry. When a movie is released, the audience are least bothered about the process that went into producing the film. The cast and crew may have put in their sweat and blood behind it, but if the final product is not appealing to the public, the movie tanks at the box-office, resulting in huge losses for its producers. As per the above statement, had the process been more important, people would have been sympathetic to the cause and recognised the efforts of the filmmakers, and instead of being a hit or a flop, every movie would have been a blockbuster. However, that has so far not been the case worldwide.
Furthermore, let us consider a different industry - a manufacturing unit where four-wheelers are produced. From designing the intricate structure of a vehicle to procuring desired raw materials, producing a prototype and finally launching it in the market, a lot of effort goes behind the scenes. The intentions are always great - to produce the best stuff that would sweep a customer off their feet. However, if the final product is not good, perhaps it is prone to skidding when driven over 60 miles per hour or the engine heats up within a couple of hours of operation, it will find very few buyers and will ultimately cost a bomb to the makers. Here, one must remember that the basic motive of an enterprise is profit, which the product fails to provide.
Even if we consider non profitable initiative, the same logic holds true. For instance, a voluntary organisation, working for eradication of illiteracy in India will be judged not on the process of its functioning, but on how many people were actually made literate or educated by them. Similarly, if we consider the Graduate Record Examination (GRE), a student who even after putting in hundreds of hours of study does not score as per his or her requirement, the examiners will not consider his or her effort. What they see is the product of the process of his study, and if the product or the answers are incorrect, he or she will get evaluated accordingly. In contrast, another student may have put in only a few hours of study, but if he or she manages to mark all answers correctly, he or she will obtain maximum marks.
Now here, in defence of the above statement, one may argue that process does matter because there can be no product without the process. Without hard work and diligent studying, most students will fail an examination, or without the process of proper scripting, acting, direction and technological support, a good movie is unlikely to be produced. Yes, it is true, but only to some extent, and nowhere does the process trump the product, as made lucid by the above examples.
Thus, in conclusion, it seems that the statement claiming that the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product is only to mollify losers, when they fail to achieve the desired result. In reality, the final product is the one that is known to people, and is appreciated, as evidenced in the aforementioned paragraphs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3029.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 625.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8464 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78855597834 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4944 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 965.7 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.908375579 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.695652174 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1739130435 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255254877858 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717539087069 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953917766197 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152835377339 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106252643549 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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