In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Author claim “In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievement within that fields”, here author have overlooked on certain fields which have being introduced recently and had no influence of past achievements like nuclear power, aerospace, nano technology, etc. However, there are many fields, where knowledge of past achievement had great influence on present achievements like cars, planes, etc. Following are the reasons why past experience important for making significant contribution in any field.
Firstly, Past experience is considered as an important assets because past experience deter us from repeating same action which can lead to failure and also allow us to make valuable contribution in any field as person does not need to spend time in experimenting from scratch. In Fields like automobile, past experience have helped a lot, today ‘s airplanes holds mostly same basic structure that were proposed by wright brothers but airplanes also holds some modifications which have made an airplane flight more reliable, comfortable and safe. If a person not having the knowledge about the airplanes structure and what difficulties wright brothers had faced before introducing first airplane flight, then he/she would able understand the importance of each component of airplanes?
Secondly, Not only in technological field, political field also require knowledge about past experiences, as it will allow a leader to assess the situations that had proven to be boon as well as situation that had create chaos and confusion among citizens. Through past experiences, leader can come to know about the demands, behavior, etc. of the people and allow leader to work effectively in interests of people.
However, there are certain fields exist in current scenario, which had no influence of past achievements and at the time of introduction of new field, there exists no past experience thus at some point fields are development based on the requirement rather than past experience. For example, Artificial intelligence field was introduced to solve problem of imitating human activities, behavior, etc. so that those robots can reduce the burden of people. These field had no influence of past achievement as such problems are yet not deal with. Thus, author’s claim that in any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make significant contribution without being strongly influenced by past experience is not true.
On wrapping up, Author’s claim holds credence as past experiences is very important if one wants to make any contribution in any field but author have presumptuously assumed that such case hold for each and every field. There are many new field introduced which have aberrant behavior than existing fields, in such case past experience/achievement holds no importance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...nes, etc. Following are the reasons why past experience important for making significant contri...
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: Experience
...contribution in any field. Firstly, Past experience is considered as an important assets be...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'asset'?
Suggestion: asset
...xperience is considered as an important assets because past experience deter us from r...
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Suggestion: experience
...nsidered as an important assets because past experience deter us from repeating same action whi...
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Suggestion: experience
...rom scratch. In Fields like automobile, past experience have helped a lot, today 's airpl...
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Suggestion:
...erience have helped a lot, today 's airplanes holds mostly same basic struct...
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...ical field also require knowledge about past experiences, as it will allow a leader to assess th...
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...o be boon as well as situation that had create chaos and confusion among citizens. Thr...
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...o be boon as well as situation that had create chaos and confusion among citizens. Thr...
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...s and confusion among citizens. Through past experiences, leader can come to know about the dema...
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...roduction of new field, there exists no past experience thus at some point fields are developme...
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...nt based on the requirement rather than past experience. For example, Artificial intelligence f...
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...on without being strongly influenced by past experience is not true. On wrapping up, Author&...
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..., Author's claim holds credence as past experiences is very important if one wants to make ...
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Suggestion: fields
...ach and every field. There are many new field introduced which have aberrant behavior...
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...vior than existing fields, in such case past experience/achievement holds no importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2469.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51116071429 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08713588363 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495535714286 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7165675893 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.3125 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4903085955 0.243740707755 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17900671292 0.0831039109588 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176637970314 0.0758088955206 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30180180954 0.150359130593 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194195297981 0.0667264976115 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.