In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Before taking a side, we should first analyse the statement being made and think
how it can shape the eagerness of an individual to make progress and achieve
a remarkable success in the respective field. While some would think it is
not necessary to get motivated by the past success in order to make significant
contribution, most are of the opinion that lot can be attained if there is
curiosity, intelligence, imagination and eagerness along with the past
experience to work for the development of the field. In my view i agree that it
is necessary to have past knowledge of the domain or field in order to contribute in its success.
The chief reason for my view is buttress of knowledge, experience and motivation
from the past success in the field. For example, in space technology there have
been tremendous growth in technology, infrastructures and equipment’s to make
space shuttles, satellites, and unmanned rovers etc. which can be used for
exploration of planets, moons, and space. Advancement in space domain was
possible by leveraging the past experiences, influence and knowledge gained
from the successful and unsuccessful missions that took place in the past.
Because to continuous research and learning from past mistakes man can now think
of reaching planets like mars and even explore outside the solar systems by
sending orbiters which can send valuable information’s that is unknown to human
beings. If there would be ant past knowledge on how solar system works? how
space looks like? and what is outside the solar system? etc. it would have
been impossible to be at the current state. The result is past achievements strongly influence the current
contribution to the field.
Another reason for my view is the evolution of human beings over the past
centuries that is possible due to the past achievements in the field of medical
science, infrastructural development, invention of new technology like internet,
computers, smartphones etc. Medical science has evolved due to the immense
learning from the research and existing knowledge from past in the curing
dangerous diseases. Now we have vaccine for small pox, polio and malaria. However,
it was absent few centuries back. Moreover, growth of technology has happened due
to the invention of the framework/skeleton few decades back on which all out
current technology work. Big machineries have been built by closely studying the
past achievements in order to deal with the current problems. In absence of the
past knowledge and achievements it would have been difficult to contribute
largely in the field or domain of interest.
After weighing both the sides contribution to a field depends
on the past knowledge which can motivate and energize an individual to contribute
significantly to the field of interest. Without an unknown path with no prior knowledge
it is not a piece of cake to contribute with full efficiency as it costs an arm
and a leg to achieve significant goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 94.0 58.6224719101 160% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2605.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36008230453 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05641727606 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462962962963 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.0 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6690026851 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.409090909 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 39.0 4.97078651685 785% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 50.0 7.80617977528 641% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325054235166 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100350050487 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102088575579 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814010555241 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818705295485 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.