The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows how Australian men and women were doing regular physical
activities in 2010. Overall, there was a noticeable trend towards physical tasks
performed by male and female population of Australia in 2010.
Firstly, apart from age group of 15 to 24 years in all other age groups number of
female doing physical activities out of total women in that age group were
more than that of percentage of male doing the same.
Furthermore, bar chart indicates that male in age group 35 to 44 years were
least inclined towards physical activities than compared to age group of 15 to
24 years which accounted the highest percentage of male being performing
physical activities. In case of women, middle-aged women were more inclined
towards physical activities when compared with younger counterparts.
At the same time , it is noticeable to see that people having age of more than
65 were also involved towards the physical activities in good number.
The percentage showcase that male and female were doing activities in almost
equal proportion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...en and women were doing regular physical activities in 2010. Overall, there was a...
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...nd women were doing regular physical activities in 2010. Overall, there was a noticeabl...
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...ticeable trend towards physical tasks performed by male and female population of Austra...
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...ut of total women in that age group were more than that of percentage of male doi...
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...f total women in that age group were more than that of percentage of male doing t...
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...at male in age group 35 to 44 years were least inclined towards physical activiti...
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...ties than compared to age group of 15 to 24 years which accounted the highest per...
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Suggestion: Physical
...t percentage of male being performing physical activities. In case of women, middle-ag...
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...en, middle-aged women were more inclined towards physical activities when compare...
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...nger counterparts. At the same time , it is noticeable to see that people hav...
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... see that people having age of more than 65 were also involved towards the physic...
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...ities in good number. The percentage showcase that male and female were doing activit...
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...d female were doing activities in almost equal proportion.
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Suggestion: Equal
...male were doing activities in almost equal proportion.
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...vities in almost equal proportion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40697674419 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70607910301 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523255813953 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5620482844 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.857142857 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256337470734 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140862671758 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801921060718 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101412169815 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582589006251 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.