The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart indicates percentage of different age groups of Australian male and female group starting from 15 to 65 and more who were physically fit and active in the year 2010.
To begin, boys at the age of 15 to 24 were more participating towards physical activity, wherein women for that matter were really fit in their late 40s ( 52.8 % and 53.3 % respectively ). Men at the stressful age of 35 to 44 could barely give importance to fitness and it was the lowest of all age groups amounting to only 39.5 %. On the other hand, Australian women had a consistent involvement with no less than 47 % in any age groups. Hardly any difference of 1 % in the senior women and men of 65 and more who wanted to stay healthy during that age.
It is surprising to see that women started getting physically active after their 30s with 48.9 %, 52.5 % and 53 % in the age groups of 25-34, 35-44 and 45-64 respectively. On the contrary, the percentage of Australian men doing physical activity dropped after 24, but their participation hiked fairly over the time up to their seniority age.
In the end, I would reiterate that more Australian women were active physically in their late 30s and mid 50s but men were most active in younger age and fairly fit in the rest of their life. Overall, a good number of both Australian men and women seem to be really healthy compared to other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61943319838 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5932293105 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.9863421045 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278255348736 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129508700696 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668756482302 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197955981797 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586514374548 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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