Anyone can post information on the internet. Some people say most of what we read on the Internet is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Technology has revolutionized tremendously over the years. With the introduction of computers, human life has become very easy. Internet has it's pros and cons. But personally I believe that it has always been very helpful.
Internet is like an encyclopedia of modern times. It has vast amount of information about almost everything and anything. There are various blogs , media companies and other sources which keep posting some or the other information daily. Internet has become a part of life in today's world. Today, in almost everything we are connected to Internet. For example, to search certain destination , we need maps, also to search about some Individual personality or some big established company , we use internet to check their details. Information which help humans and are actually introduced in the internet to ease human lives , can never be inaccurate. But there is also an argument that some technical information differ in internet, when searched in different supporting websites. For example, a company's revenue for the current year may differ since people won't have first hand information about the company unless he/she is the employee of the firm. So, relevance and how genuine the websites or blogs are , will decide whether the information is accurate enough or not.
It is hard to say that the information what we read is inaccurate most of the times. Different people have different opinions about something and they give advice according to their individual experiences, hence, here the relevance of the information matters. Factual information in today's time is hard to believe to be inaccurate , since the whole world is using internet and is almost dependant on it for their economic development. Today, people have improvised information technology effectively , since huge companies rely on them. To conclude , it would be difficult to agree that the information provided on internet would be inaccurate unless the source is genuine and relevant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34185303514 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92527843267 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7969504933 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10526315789 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294275666114 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875725863419 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729812243456 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165915044762 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867820025105 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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