In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Endeavor as the world implies, is to gain achievement in a particular field. Achievement is something which has no limits or boundaries. It is like the target which any company lets for its sale in a particular financial year, lower the bar set then easier it would be to achieve. To achieve a success in a field totally depends upon an individual rather than the circumstances or the background provided by that field.
Every field has an equal opportunity to be successful. A field less known to the world have so much more to be uncovered, so much more to be learned, so much more yet to be achieved in it. Whereas, a field well known to others will lead to more competition. More competition will then require more hard work. The success in a field like this comes with the heavy pain to gain it.
For example, every body knows the famous scientist 'Einstein'. He discovered the phenomena of gravity, the term on which our enter habitat is dependent upon. The gravitational force introduced by him has led to the path of various other opportunities to find the answers of various unanswered questions. Today scientist has made many progress and will make many more progress in future, but the one who invented the idea will still remain the famously renowned personality of the world. Isn't it the biggest endeavor ever.
Different individual have different outlook, in a country like India 'Software Engineer' is considered as the best profession to get your child in for further studies. But what the statistics states, there are over 3-4 million of students every year graduating as an Engineer and about more than 1/4th of these students struggle hard to get placements.
Even though the stream proclaims to get you the highly paid jobs, but still because of so much competition in the field the chances of achieving the best for you becomes less. Every field has high competition. You have to struggle hard to achieve in a field well known in comparison to the field that has not shown remarkable good amount of achievement. You can bring out the best in that field.
Therefore, endeavor of an individual is not dependent on the previous achievement list of a field. A field or a thought not known to anyone will make you more successful by just introducing the importance of it to the world. World is full of opportunities and one should always pursue what interest him/her the most. Instead of looking on the past endeavors, people should follow their interest with enthusiasm. One will always succeed if we will not decide our path based on the outlook of others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... so much more yet to be achieved in it. Whereas, a field well known to others will lead...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun progress seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much progress', 'a good deal of progress'.
Suggestion: much progress; a good deal of progress
...red questions. Today scientist has made many progress and will make many more progress in fut...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ogress and will make many more progress in future, but the one who invented the idea will...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...usly renowned personality of the world. Isnt it the biggest endeavor ever. Differ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79820627803 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72378246761 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495515695067 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.125262864 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.84 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235829938271 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748790210946 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690117557469 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120807853557 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806578423737 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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