In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The contributions that are made in any field tend to be important only when they give positive outcomes. Although it is quite obvious that in almost any field the beginner who is new in the industry would always keep abreast of about what is present in the market and what is not. Therefore, I almost agree to the statement that in any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make vital contributions.
Firstly, the industries that are related to teen fashion would always consider the beginners who are supposedly be youngsters to give opinion on the matters that are related to marketing. Dilettantes, as they are new in the field they tend to use their general knowledge rather than focusing on the intricacies. On the other hand, expierenced people who are not in touch with teenagers because of their age gap may or may not be able to understand what is trendy for teenagers. Hence, in such cases, people who are new in the industry would be right choice in terms of making important contributions.
Secondly, in the information technology sector, technology is changing swiftly, every new month new technology comes. Only beginners, who remain curious in the field would be able to retain the knowledge of such technologies. Once a person become experienced he/she does not want to give much attention to the change and rather would like to work in the fields in which they are presently employed to. Therefore, in such cases beginner is more likely to give more vital and distinct reviews and contribution in the related field.
Thirdly, although, the statement might be true for the industries that requires the information that changes frequently, there are certain fields where expirience matters more than anything else. Politics is one of the prominent examples of such field. In politics, if a new person becomes a candidate then he/she lacks in the experience of oratory, how to lure people on their side and which other candidates will support their ideas and who would not. On the other hand the person who is experienced would not have to worry about such situations and would be relevant to give important decisions through which their party and people, both will be satisfied.
Lastly, as presented in the essay there are fields that require the contributions of beginners more than that of the experienced, there are other industries where situations are opposite. Therefore, the issue might work for one situation and would not for others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97607655502 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72257212642 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447368421053 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0053472687 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.352941176 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184877759235 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726811423307 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650567035195 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12298326542 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563998322894 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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