Art works like films novels poems or paintings can have value only when most people can understand them Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take

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Art works, like films, novels, poems, or paintings, can have value only when most people can understand them.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Art is an uncommon work, unlike other work art work differentiate. Art is work which involve person emotion, thoughts so that he may deliberate to people. I agree with given statement suggest that Art works, novels, poem or paintings, can have value only when most peoples can understand them. Presenting art perhaps sending an hidden message it's tough task.

Art work involve such a as novels, films, poems, or painting. In an film art, the vary related example for engineer, a movie name Three idiots. In this films an director more focus to wards an engineer life style, what there exact issue at study of engineering. The art work or film makers main moto to wards an engineer, there parents, the films give hidden that learn what you like instead under pressure of society your growth stuck up at one ends. If peoples where unable to undestand hidden meaning then it may have no value.

In Novel, there are various novels novelist. It might be person autobiography, it might be histroy events. I read Novel of autobiography of late Apple CEO, Steve Jobs. writers art plays an important role while presenting some ones life style, from begineening to the ends. In this novel, an very proper sequences which curiosity to reader to read the further more. In this novel, novelist highlight all the age of Steeve jobs from children to successive CEO. If you have not understanding or main moto of novelist then it may not value to novelist art work.

In current, film industry most director introduces films, serials from an previous novels. They introduces all set up as same as earlier years ago it may hold. so, it's totally depends upon art work, they put hard effort, rehersal to draw an novel infront of general public. It also equally depends upon, public who review the serials, there channels. because after all, they may encourage from publics enthusiastic review which further help to them to make improve.

Art is one work who present and deliver an concept from perrson to person. If you are not adopted practice to see somthing in to an positive it may hold an profitable to both artist and you. person need find hidden agenda of artist work, so that he may encourage himself. he also come up with an new idea, unless and until you may not value to any artist for his work you also lagging in finding mistakes .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, thus, while, after all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75369458128 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40853673554 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9532809246 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.24 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283389173944 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757726127126 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809995271613 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161061658101 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076618906111 0.0667264976115 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.