To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A leader is a representative of a society and is meant to lead by an example. Hence, the leader must maintain highest ethical and moral standards if he or she wants to get things done in a right and productive manner. There are three instances where having highest ethical and moral standards can helps a person to become an effective leader.
Firstly, an effective leader has the ability to unify majority of the people in the society. For example, Current Indian prime minister Narendra Modi won the national election in 2019 with 65 percent of the lok sabha seats, this win was achieved by a significant majority over the opposition party leader Rahul Gandhi. The reason why Modi won was because he was able to unify people by talking about the pending important issues that were halting india’s growth. As many of the other politicians also talked about the same issue in their own rallies, Narendra modi’s demeanor of a simple moralistic good person helped him convince majority of the people that he was the right person to solve those impeding problems. The above example shows how important it is to have good moral standards to be an effective leader and differentiate yourself from other leaders.
Secondly, a leader who has highest ethical standards will pass legislation that will help reduce corruption in society leading to better safety for people. For example, Uttar Pradesh which is one of the largest states of india had elected Yogendra Nath as their cabinet minister because he had given up on marriage and self leisures and made his life purpose to serve the people of the state with his full attention and upmost morality. He suggested to the public that he will open a direct app that will help people report crimes of corruption by providing video or audio evidences. Since he came to power, there are hardly any gangster violence reported in the newspapers and many corrupted police officers have been caught using the app.
In conclusion, leaders with highest ethical standards become effective leaders because they have the confidence that the majority of the public will trust them as they do not have any mischievious doings to worry about.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'maintain the highest'.
Suggestion: maintain the highest
...d by an example. Hence, the leader must maintain highest ethical and moral standards if he or sh...
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Suggestion: having the highest
...manner. There are three instances where having highest ethical and moral standards can helps a...
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Suggestion: has the highest
... other leaders. Secondly, a leader who has highest ethical standards will pass legislation...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...ing the app. In conclusion, leaders with highest ethical standards become effective lead...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9591280654 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54512249387 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564032697548 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8500250109 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156028125507 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648846505591 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534575581369 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108320690128 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526801301189 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.