The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
Corporations in order to maximize their profits do cut off certain aspects of their cost of production,
which certainly can create a conflict with the general welfare of the nation.Corporations can cut their
costs to maximize their profits in the following ways -
Firstly,Nowadays Corporations are trying to automate their productions and manufacturing as much
as they can which leads to laying off employees and replacing them with machines instead which
can create huge amount unemployment issues in the nation.
Secondly,In order to maximize profits certain manufacturing corporations do not take care of the
proper means to dump the residual waste produced by them.They dump it into the rivers which can
pollute the river for both humans and marine life leading to health problems.
Lastly,Most common way of decreasing the cost of the product to maximize the profit is to degrade
the quality of the ingredients in a product or sometimes even adulterate the product .For Example -
Milk companies dilute their milk with water in order to increase their margin in sales to bring in
greater revenue. This can lead to malnutrition in poverty ridden villages and middle class people
who can afford milk only in required amount and diluting it will decrease the essential ingredients
needed for a human body on a diurnal basis.
Hence,Maximizing profits comes at a cost of diminution of parts of the company which can effect
people in a nation at a very large scale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27615062762 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03707229582 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573221757322 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.270651359 60.3974514979 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 252.2 118.986275619 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8 23.4991977007 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6 5.21951772744 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185906080133 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943360185075 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703792095767 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062061043484 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064315411605 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 14.1392134831 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 48.8420337079 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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