Only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...k of art can be interpreted differently.It can be interpreted as understanding the...
^^
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... are able to relate to the story behind an work of art then it is self-evident to ...
^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...lf-evident to be more popular and great.For example - Most popular songs like &apos...
^^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...when they feel sad. On the other side , there are cases when people dont fully ...
^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ther side , there are cases when people dont fully understand the skill involved in ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... a significant meaning among the masses.For example- Most people dont know the mech...
^^^
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ong the masses.For example- Most people dont know the mechanical engineering involve...
^^^^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eople are trying to understand in an art . If it is its story then more the people...
^^
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le are trying to understand in an art . If it is its story then more the people un...
^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Otherwise
... people understand the more great it is.Otherwise some art form are still popular regardl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
... people understand the more great it is.Otherwise some art form are still popular regardl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me art form are still popular regardless lack of understanding of by the masses t...
^^
Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ng of by the masses the skills required to to make it.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, then, well, for example, as well as, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7025862069 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84850313713 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521551724138 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.981032932 60.3974514979 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 218.2 118.986275619 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.4 23.4991977007 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.21951772744 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0362381159914 0.243740707755 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184479176941 0.0831039109588 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230442995244 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0230598971176 0.150359130593 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236103347011 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 14.1392134831 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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