Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws are built as a disciplinary line that the people of a nation should not cross, but laws do get old and circumstances changes with time leading to what was not ok in the past being ok in todays world. Hence I agree that laws should be flexible in most cases and should account for various circumstances, times and places.
To begin with old laws may not hold that much of water in contemperary world. For example, United States of America’s founders created second amendment that protects the right of citizens to bear arms in order to defend themselves from government tyranny. At the time the law was created it was very well justified, as most of weapons in those times couldn’t be used for mass shootings. However, nowadays we have modern weapons which are far more deadly then they were in the eighteenth century. In light of the recent events, mass shootings in El Paso, Dayton and Las Vegas where the convict used automatic weapons capable of firing multiple rounds per seconds amounting to huge number of deaths, this shows us why it is important that second amendment should be modified to protect citizens safety. The above shows that the circumstances have changed since the 18th century and so should the law.
Also, if the nation is big enough to have multiple states, many of them having different cultures and religions. Then laws should also be created taking into account those believes. For Example, In usa, states of california and newyork are pro-choice in terms of abortion and people support these laws, where as states like Louisiana, Alabama, where majority of the population are catholic and pro-life. So the laws should be flexible enough to allow abortions in states of california and new york and forbidden in Louisiana and Alabama.
Finally, there can be some laws that do not need to be flexible, like in case of first degree murder or mass shootings as these are clear cut monstrous acts that should be punished with as much speed as possible.
In conclusion, as laws are created with much deliberation, the implementaion of the law should also be done with similar delibration as what was not normalised in the past must have evolved to something more complex in todays world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86578947368 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62839149068 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534210526316 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5954892142 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.071428571 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.21951772744 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199737674861 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795814496689 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709093383147 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119224213937 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455011819426 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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