Essay topic 19: Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Justice of law is the basic requirement for a democratic government as people behave in accordance with the laws. Any impair jurisdiction will have detrimental influence on people and government, therefore, people must obey laws apart from the conditions controlled morally which require flexibility of circumstances, time and place preferably case by case basis.
To begin with, the authority should make specific standard of laws and behavior of violation when we drive a car, we must follow the rules of traffic and driving to prevent any serious accidents and driving problems. As citizens of a country, we must pay the taxes to provide the revenues of the country to enable the government to enhance our quality of life. Thus, there is little discussion of punishing law breakers as long as the security and quality of citizens’ life is concerned. On the other hand, the authority must consider some situations and cases which require the revision and flexibility of laws. To exemplify this, let us consider the development of Internet. Development of technology of the Internet has played a vital role in our daily life these days. As people are connected globally and the authority also needs the nation privacy protection of internet, the impact of protecting people’s privacy is more and more fundamental to the country. Therefore, the legislation of Internet privacy is imperative and the relevant existing laws must be revised immediately.
In addition, there are some cases that the law is not a good choice whereas the morality does. For instance, there is a debate about the legislation that adults must look after the elderly by law in China. Since China is a traditional country in which respecting elderly is the basic moral rule of the country. Therefore, it is the area of morality not the law.
In conclusion, laws must be enforced to protect the country against various types of crimes to avoid any detrimental affects on citizens’ life. However, laws could be flexible as the morality concerns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... place preferably case by case basis. To begin with, the authority should make...
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Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...look after the elderly by law in China. Since China is a traditional country in which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, whereas, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19335347432 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94327740196 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525679758308 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8321682988 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11945233062 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434493322979 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303212594263 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832380938236 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162311213746 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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