Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In

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Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

A leader is not just a person who leads the society by an example but also is capable of looking at the bigger picture while leading. This task is often hard and requires having a strong logical thinking brain. As most of the time popular opinion is driven by emotion, making decision based on popular opinion can affect negatively for the society.
Firstly, as social media is a big information sharing source in nowadays world. Most of the information cited on these platform have no fact checkings. People can easily be emotionally manipulated by videos on these platforms to induce reactions which can result in people demanding immediate action agianst the problem. For example, after the mumbai terror attacks in september 2011, a video surfaced where a terrorist named kasab was shown killing innocent people in taj hotel. As kasab was caught and jailed during the attacks by the police, people after watching the video expected government to publically execute him immediately. Even though the idea provides justice to the innocent lives lost, government leaders kept their cool and made sure to interrgoate the terrorist and get as much intel as possible to avoid future attacks in the country before executing him. This decision by government insured that the people remain safe in the future.
Also, leaders need to find a balance between listening to popular opinion and ground reality before making any legislation decisions. For example, Most of the people in kashmir didn’t want article 370 that declared them as independent states to be removed. But the current indian government after due deliberation removed the article because there were certain big parts of kashmir like Ladakh, which were not much populated and wanted to be associated with india as a whole.
Although, leaders are humans too and can sometimes make mistakes of not listening the popular opinion. This could result in people voting them out. But most of the time that is the case of ignorance and not able to see the bigger picture by the leader.
In conclusion, leaders should not be easily influenced by shifts of popular opinion as it might impede their ability to help the people in a long term situation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03551912568 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54198376227 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.926842162 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123450433482 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370502768574 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040349536806 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812510948983 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322746086099 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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