Issue 114: Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In our society, there are diverse leaders in diverse organization, and their decision-making can develop the organization or even destroy the organization. In feature of the decision-making, it is debatable whether the leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little or much. However, I disagree with the statement. In other words, not all leaders who affected easily will accomplish little.
Granted, some organizations grounded on long-term technology need not to be easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion. Hardware technology company in electrical engineering can be proper example. In development of the specific hardware, it takes a significantly long time and effort. However, the need of that hardware cannot be predicted in present, they only know about its need in future because the need of that hardware highly depends on the external environment according to its usage. Thus, easily shifted leader by common opinion may mar the higher achievements in hardware technology.
However, some organizations based on short-term technology need to be easily influenced by popular thoughts. Software technology can be a good example of this case. “User friendly environment” is one of the most important issue in software development, since software is the closest system with the users. Therefore, users are lured to the software considered as comfortable in their own opinion. This means that without quick feedback from popular opinion, it is hard to survive in software market. This denotes that the leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish more.
Nowadays, the portion of the short-term technology are increasing based on the concrete technological background. This leads to the importance of the feedback from public opinion. Based on this trend, people should consider the opinions of those around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...ounded on long-term technology need not to be easily influenced by shifts in popular ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56610169492 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12646403511 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528813559322 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3487501117 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225059648687 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838267816616 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957002238276 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139332959489 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09282117423 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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