Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the democratic society, we expect our leaders to portray our ideas of the society and cast a vote to those who seem pertinent for that job. However, after being elected the leader may not conform to our standards of legislation. Although it is important that these leaders accomplish their ideas of the society, it is also important that they are able to listen to the general as well, and make harmony between the different notions.
Admittedly, a leader should be able to steadfast a policy even if it raises controversy. Without any conviction for their policies, a government official will accomplish very little because there is no such thing as a perfect law: every law has its ups and downs and thus proponents and opponents. If a leader sways every time a rebuttal is raised, he will certainly not be able to fulfill his objectives. For instance, Obama was able to create Obama care - which was very controversial due to the lucid pros and cons it will bring to the society - because he was confident about his ideas and that it will be helpful the US citizens in general. If he lacked the confidence, he would have nullified the policy and US would not have a efficient health care system.
Nevertheless, a leader who is highly obstinate could cause ominous effects to a nation. Even in situations when the consequences seem patent and the public is conscience of the policy, these leaders may push their ways because their haughtiness. For instance, G. Bush started the Iraq war even though US citizens thought that it would be costly to the nation. His strong beliefs lead to numerous US soldiers' sacrifice and a significant part of the national budget was mete to support this misery, and this war caused most advocates of the presidency to turn their backs on the government due to the futile policies. Consequently, a leader should to some extent, take the public opinion into account.
Furthermore, to be a efficient leader one should be able to balance between one's own notions and the public's notions. In a democratic society, a leader is a representative of the society not a ruler: the individual is elected to portray our notions and will for the community while granted the authority to do so in their way. For example, President Moon in Korea, has created the citizen's Sinmungo - a online communication system enabling citizens to communicate with the presidential house - to get a insight into public needs. This policy is extoled by the korean citizens because it helps the leader to portray their ideas into governing the country.
In conclusion, although a leader should be obdurate enough to carry out his morals, it should not be to the extent that the individual does not listen to the public. Rather, he should be able to reach reasonable consensus between the public and oneself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88981288981 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74908848747 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2849900057 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.05 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109996634243 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386422747892 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279028690696 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624354885209 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145255538305 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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