“To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.”
In colloquial language, a public official is a representative for people holding a public office. In many cases, public officials are responsible for marshaling ideas and implement them to make day to day lives of citizens easy and efficient. The ethical and moral standards are the norms which are mandated to be followed and which are not only defined and endorsed but are laudable by the general public. They play one of the most critical part while evaluating the performance of public official. I thoroughly agree with the statement that for a public official to be an effective leader, he/she must follow and maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
A good leader is one who brings out the best in people, inspires others to achieve their full potential, fosters creativity and co-operation among team members to achieve common goal and is open to myriad of new ideas and takes criticism in constructive manner. Good leader shows care and affection towards others and is an empath. But that doesn’t mean he never objects or criticizes. He says things in forthright manner and explains his/her reasons for so while maintaining the highest level of discipline and other moral standards.
Public officials are almost found at all places from traffic police to lawyers to judges to presidents in parliamentary palaces. They are an inevitable part of society. Imagine a situation where there is complete chaos and a cohort of people skirmish on unimportant or petty issues regarding the task at hand. A good leader understands both sides of view and puts forth the best possible solution with the perfect diction of speech. Likewise, consider project which involves humongous amount of funds and funds needs to be raised from the general public. An effective leader, apart from conveying the needed information ensures transparency and makes sure the funds allocated to the cause are used correctly rather than aiding to siphon it off or abetting to deploy it to fruitless returns.
No one can gainsay the fact that we undoubtedly live in best time in human history yet over the past few years’ atrocities and violence have dramatically increased, especially in the case of murder and raping of innocent young women and children. If it weren’t for police to report murder and lawyers to bring victims of crime to justice, I highly doubt the status quo of modern society and the means by which it could function and govern. Highly ranked public officials are responsible in forming defense and combative policies to protect its citizens from threats of terror.
Some of the great public officials to which one can look up to are John F. Kennedy and Abraham Lincoln. Both were widely loved by the American people as they selflessly and tirelessly worked for the interests of the common people and because of their selfless commitment and perseverance have cemented their legacy in history.
Lastly, but not the least, these are only a portion of traits and ways which for a public official to become an effective leader must follow. The possibilities are practically endless. Hence, by the above examples, one can conclude that for a public official to be an effective leader one must maintain the highest possible standards.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ed and endorsed but are laudable by the general public. They play one of the most critical par...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...s and funds needs to be raised from the general public. An effective leader, apart from convey...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...insay the fact that we undoubtedly live in best time in human history yet over the past...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... its citizens from threats of terror. Some of the great public officials to which one can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, lastly, likewise, look, regarding, so, while, apart from, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 37.0 14.8657303371 249% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2724.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08208955224 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72612805973 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 291.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542910447761 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 862.2 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5141968657 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389623969877 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965807311908 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112079871089 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183269944099 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12157294711 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 100.480337079 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.