To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
A nation is propelled by the dominating government which infact is the heart of the nation, and the government is composed of the politicians who are elected as leaders by the citizens of the nation. The elected leaders whom can be resembled as the veins of the country whos proper function in a way indicates a healthy heart(government). The statement suggests that the how effective a leader is, is dependent on the how the official maintains ethical and moral standard, to which in my opinion I strongly agree with the statement and to corroborate the statement by following three reasons.
To begin with, and simplify explain, what is the point of view of a young individual who is going to vote for the very first time? what would the individual think before going to vote for the leader of his constituency? First and the most important thing would be the how well is the official in terms of behaving and interacting with the citizens and how well could the official address the citizens and their concerns. For instance, if a official who is consenting for an election is very rhetoric in terms of speech but his/her work does not reflects as well as described in the speech then one could judge the officials work ethics and morals. Which in a way gives the young voter an idea whether or not to vote for the official and appoint him/her as a leader of his constituency.
Secondly, a leaders work ethics displays his passion to serve the nation and which in a explicit way portrays the image of the government and a nation as a whole. In India there are many officials who are well known for their work ethics, to pin point let’s take example of late Mrs. shusma swaraj who was designated as a external affairs minister for the government of India. She was a epitome leader and served the nation by probity. Her diplomacy could be reflected by strong ties with the foreign nations and promptness of his work to resolve a matter as an external affair minister. She has set a benchmark in terms of how a leader should follow certain morals which would lead to reinforce the output of the work. This states that how well one could follow and inure certain ethics in life as a public official.
Thirdly, if a leader is not maintaining the required ethics and moral and trying to be unfair to the citizens by using his deceptive tricks, then it could in a way backfire and the citiens might loose faith from the leaders ability to serve for them. For instance, if a leader from a constituency is not able to deliver the citizens demands then the citiens would not re-elect the leader for next term. For instance, in Indian politics commissioned under national election comittion of india there is a 5 year term for a government and every 5 years there are re-elections in which the leaders who were not able to deliver in previous terms are either not given a chance to concent by the political parties or if given a chance not able to win the elections due to not able to deliver in last term. So a leader should always maintain certain morals to deliver the citizens and justify the role as a leader.
To conclude,if a leader wants to gain trust of citizens then it is very cardinal for the lader to follow certain ethics and morals to get elected and serve the nation. If a leader does not follow these ethics and morals then the whole point of being a public official holds no water as these are the characteristics that a leader must.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2851.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 619.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60581583199 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98795655647 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57876108685 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.403877221325 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 880.2 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8681908835 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.761904762 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4761904762 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275291751658 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934295063383 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750466957561 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177964430113 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558026269254 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.