The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author contends that having a passionate interst in those areas which are a routine and in turn have become a common place is where the best ideas emerge from. This statement holds true until that zeal and enthusiasm is alive, generally any work done on regular basis becomes a lackluster and the efficiency with which that work was done reduces over the period of time.However, that spark if somehow kept alive can take the advantage of the experience gained in this commonplace and bring in ideas which will be beneficial for the field .To elucidate my point, many illustrations which strengthen my stand are pervasive in the passage.
Starting with my own experience in a software company,. Being an I.T person in the same company since last eight years I have seen many batches come and leave, young and old. Our manager is keen on developing new tools which can be beneficial for the company even though they are not a part of any project. He is not being billed from any client for any extra activity that he takes up, but his passion and dedication towards programming is so intense that he is self motivated and brings out challenging problems encountered in various past or current projects and tries to automate these tasks with the amount of knowlde he has. This in turn has made everyone's life easier as the upper level management is saving on the costs and lower level is saving on the manual efforts that were recurssive. Such innovations can only come if one finds to do new ways of doing the same old things.
Simillarly, another everyday work for juice vendors is peeling and cutting the fruits, which can get tedious after some time. Many people keep switching their jobs but those who remain and keep the interest alive come out with faster and efficient way of peeling these cumbersome fruits. I have personally seen many people who take out all the grains of a pomogranate in few seconds by making use of their constant dedication and knowledge.Moreover in truck loading they get experienced with the angles they can throw the massive objects so that it lands where it is supposed to instead of using four labors to pass the same parcel.
Even bar tenders who used to serve liquors at the bars earlier, in their free time one of them started juggling with the bottles, or the fire on the bottles which led to the whole new entertainment and a mode of attention for people attenting clubs and parties. Again, another piece of example .
Hence, to conclude any work that is done frequently can get monotonous, but the passion added to the same daily chores can turn the table around and bring in positive, creative and innovative ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74408602151 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52708075749 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.674933309 60.3974514979 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.571428571 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2142857143 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134888928813 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042597153495 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377973424979 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698813847414 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473887263298 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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