What are commonplace things? Birds flying in the open skies, animals roaming on a field, flowers blossoming in the garden or the buildings in which we live!. So commonplace things can be regarded as anything with which we are quite familiar with and interact with them in a routinely manner. Human beings have since long getting influenced by the things around them; may it be the lush green trees, majestic snow capped mountains or turbulent rivers. One of the leading factors of technological advancement we see today is the inspirations drawn by engineers and scientists from things they observe in their environment.
Construction of houses for living was known to be inspired from the termites building the earthen mounds. Newton developed the ingenious idea of ‘gravity’ from the ordinary observation of an apple falling from the tree. The apparently blind and scary looking bats inspired the invention of the sonars which are now the integral part of modern day ships for navigating the majestic seas. The movement of stealthy fish underneath waters gave the idea about submarines which have been used for military as well as exploration purposes. Mankind has always looked towards birds soaring into the blue sky in awe and envy; this intrigue ultimately resulted in the invention of airplanes.
Although there are numerous examples of inventions that have been known to be motivated by the commonplace objects, there are some inventions that cannot be attributed to be inspired from ordinary things. One such astounding invention is the wheel, which is in fact known to be the single most essential creation of a mankind intellect. Nothing like that existed which could have stimulated anyone, however in this case necessity which is in fact known to be the mother of invention played its part. The need for growth actually compelled the people of ancient world to make wheel for supporting their ambitions.
In the end it could be concluded that everyday things do inspire ideas, however there are other important factors that cannot be overlooked for the consequential innovation. The most important such factor is actually the 'necessity' which has been the single most inspiration in the human history that has resulted in to miracles. Therefore using the term 'best ideas' would be overstretching and misleading, however the commonplace things had inspired wonderful ideas if not the ultimate ‘best’ ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Birds
What are commonplace things ? birds flying in the open skies, animals roami...
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Message: You used an adverb ('routinely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('manner') instead of another adjective.
...familiar with and interact with them in a routinely manner. Human beings have since long getting i...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...s have since long getting influenced by the things around them; may it it be the lush green trees, maj...
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Suggestion: it
...fluenced by the things around them; may it it be the lush green trees, majestic snow ...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ed by the things around them; may it it be the lush green trees, majestic snow cap...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...story that has resulted in to miracles. Therefore using the term best ideas would be over...
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Suggestion: term the best
...ted in to miracles. Therefore using the term best ideas would be overstretching, however ...
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...ce things had inspired wonderful ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, look, may, so, then, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76602294669 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549857549858 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3241103808 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117721685411 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422196660319 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318476129544 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767653024812 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242751457919 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.