The best way to prepare young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling them a sense on cooperation, not competition.
Young people are future of any country and they should be capable enough to complete any task given to them. the leadership is quality in which one should require much talent and thinking capacity, management should be done effectively, and should know how to make people work under it. I agree with the claim that society should prepare the young people for leadership in society and government by cooperation with each other.
The leader is one, who supports the people in their group and guide them in proper direction, the leader is one who joins the group and work with them and gives the equal credit to each and every one. This is done only be cooperation, if cooperation between the leader and team mates will not be seen then the given task will not be done effectively and outcomes will be not desirable. APJ Abdul Kalam is great example of a leader and supporter of their project mates. Whenever the project is going under his guidance he guides his team and teach them true things which they should be understand and imply in future.
The person is said to be a leader when he leads the group by doing right things at right places. Whenever there is a problem or failure in the project then he takes mistakes on himself and not by blaming the teammates. For example, the father of India Mahatma Gandhi made certain steps to free India from the seige of the Britain. Many people today follows his footsteps to achieve something. Moreover, when there is competition in some field then it will be not called leadership. With the help of cooperation with the other leaders and people it made possible for Mahatma Gandhi to take few steps.
Though, the the leadership can also be obtained by competition till some extinct, like in office, to take leadership in some project, one has to compete with other mate in order to get that project in your hand. But after Getting the project one has to do cooperation with teammates to successfully complete the project.
Hence, the leader should be encourage to do their work with cooperation with other, other than competition. In my opinion, considering all above points the claim that people should prepare young people for leadership in society in them by cooperation rather than competition is correct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79336734694 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47332578345 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9310221677 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188039105289 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664682489196 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650386925094 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121674775728 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687771924541 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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