The best way for a society to prepare its young for the leadership in government, industry or other field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
We live in the world of competition where to stay in the race we have to prove ourselves better we have to compete and thus competition is imbibed within us from the nascent age. Competition is necessary but for leadership, the sense of cooperation proves to be beneficial than the competition. To lead a government, industry or any field it is necessary for a leader to possess the quality of cooperation to achieve great height. If a leader becomes competitive he is not compatible with any situation and thus by any hook or crook he wants to achieve success. Leadership requires great patience, courage, cooperation and always eager to progress attitude. Therefore to prepare young for leadership I think they should be instilled a sense of cooperation rather than competition.
The society we live in always teaches us to compete and prove better from other. We always somehow in our life compete with one another. The competitive spirit is a must for development and we always bombarded by our relatives, parents, friends to prove ourselves better than others. But in leadership competitive spirit can lead to haphazard and can lead to devastation if taken to an extreme level. Healthy competition is good but if this competitive spirit leads you to the wrong path and hinders your mentality to differentiate between what's wrong and what's right then probably that competitive spirit will never help you grow. We can consider an example of a leader who collapsed due to his competitive spirit, Adolf Hitler. Adolf Hitler was indeed a great leader as he had the ability to convince huge mass along his side but due to his covet to prove himself and his society superior he crossed all the boundaries and thus collapsed.
Leadership requires cooperation among team members as well as the other competitive leaders. A great example of a leader who led his government by cooperation was Abraham Lincoln. He led his government by such a great pace that he was able to stop the civil war and also he always has cooperation among the committee members with whom he lived as well as others. This quality can lead a person to a great height and that is the reason why the name of Lincoln is ingrained in the world of history as a successful leader.
In the multinational organization, cooperation is must in the CEO of the organization otherwise the employees working in the organization will never able to give their full output and also if they are lambasted they will leave the company and this will result in the collapse of the company. This is the reason why CEO of a company must possess cooperation to make their employees work efficiently and give their best to the company.
In conclusion, leadership is all about the cooperative nature of the leader to lead his company to a great height. If competitive spirit turns into an evil game with a motive to win anyhow then this can cause devastation for the company. Therefore it is necessary for society to instill in their young the spirit of cooperation rather than a competitive spirit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85823754789 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85507976314 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417624521073 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.9 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.075340183 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147972565464 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580640245133 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081871518886 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883523638086 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786085558045 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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