The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Young people are the future of any country and shaping them up as the leaders of tomorrow is the most significant job of the society. The author claims that best way to prepare them for leadership is by instilling cooperation among them rather than competition. I partially agree with the given statement even though, cooperation is required but competition will be one crucial factor in preparing them as leaders of tomorrow.
A potential leader is one who is compassionate, has foresight, good decision maker and not afraid to take risks. So, if we instill only cooperation among the youth we will not create a leader rather, youngsters who will always depend on their group and cannot stand on their own. If a sense of competition exists among them then, the very competitive environment will push them to explore their skills and push them in achieving heights when compared to their adversaries and take risks.
Let us take politics as an example, here the well known leaders of today are born due to competitiveness among their party people. Eventhough Obama and Hilary belonged to same Democratic party the competitiveness among them lead to exploration of their skills through debates, speeches and presentation of their ideas which inturn led to identification of a great leader and president for United states.
On the otherhand, too much of competition among the people will also lead youngsters to resort to immoral ways in achieving things and will also lead to trick people to do harmful things to their contemporaries. Our history is filled with lot of examples were we have seen people getting involved in corrupt practices like bribery, killing others to achieve their goals and take leadership .
To recapitulate, competition among young people will always push young people to break the barriers set by their mind and make them great leaders of tomorrow. Cooperation among them is also required for success of these leaders in their respective industries .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12962962963 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86892314502 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6732138264 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194381781178 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883139914874 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951773778062 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124219743691 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082673366471 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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