People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
What is attitude ? It is the way in which we think, feel about things which largely influence our decisions. so, we can unquestionably say "Attitude is Everything". Our attitude mainly takes shape from things which closely interact with us. So, I agree with the statement that one's attitude is determined more by our immediate surroundings or situation rather than society as a whole.
The environment or surroundings around us largely determine the way in which we perceive things and our response. A newly born child even though carry external traits of their parents genetically but his/her attitude develops based on people or things with whom he/she interacts. A child born in a criminal surrounding or surrounding which does not follow moral standards will develop more or less possess negative attitude and will grow to be a bad person. so things or people around us or with whom our interaction is more will have a immense effect on our attitude.
The statement or saying ,situation shows the real face of a person is largely true. A person who is in a stressful situation will show an annoying or negative attitude towards people. We can also see a person who lost his wife in a recent accident will have a negative attitude towards life and will also feel like commiting suicide.So the situations also predominantly affect our attitude.
We simply cannot ignore the role of society as a whole in few cases. For example Nowadays gay marriages are accepted, this is largely due to government policies and acceptance of the society. Even when people of past society who are in our immediate surroundings try to influence our attitude people are moving from a state of neglectance to acceptance. In these cases we cannot deny the role of society as a whole.
To conclude, the way in which we see things predominantly depends on our surroundings and our immediate situation. Our society should create a good surrounding or situation for our people to develop a positive attitude.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'more or less']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245901639344 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.147540983607 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0710382513661 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.068306010929 0.0497285424764 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0737704918033 0.0444667217837 166% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103825136612 0.12292977631 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0245901639344 0.0406280797675 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95130752104 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016393442623 0.030933414821 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0846994535519 0.0997080785238 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0300546448087 0.0249443105267 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0355191256831 0.0148568991511 239% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2007.0 2732.02544248 73% => OK
No of words: 335.0 452.878318584 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99104477612 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382089552239 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271641791045 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205970149254 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140298507463 0.132149295362 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95130752104 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49552238806 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 50.9960562361 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6111111111 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8366665455 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 45.7752902156 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.29245283019 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235312814798 0.391690518653 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119020622424 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0665834128189 0.077325440228 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559748744929 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.100807939959 0.149214159877 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890656775837 0.161403998019 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939790134336 0.0892212321368 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270345897391 0.385218514788 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0591616741519 0.0692045440612 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138122417143 0.275328986314 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490071095894 0.0653680567796 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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